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07-04-05, 05:29 AM
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"Pressure Off My Chest"
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Just listen to me for a sec...just give me time to breathe...
Would you belive me if I told you that you can set me free..? Make the pain cease, have the power to set me at ease..? The reach to feel complete, instead of all this ill defeat...? ...Now I Have Your Attention... At a first glance...honestly tell me who do you envision..? Am I just a slow moving cirlce, spiralling in a repetition..? Am I somebody you admire, or despise and spit hatred on..? Or am I somebody who's unlucky, in life the stakes are wrong..? Fuck it, I hate this song...why, is it because I'm the creator..? Maybe it's because it reminds me my life is a dark deep crater... The walls are too high...gawd damn, I just skip as I grasp... I fall onto grass, no glass...but I know it's anothere trap... 'Cause I may land softly...but the pain remains a stain... Over and over again, the game replays the same in my brain... No escape, no downward slopes will lead me back home... This gawd damn phone is breaking my fuckin' back bone... ...AHH!!!... I'm so mixed up...it's like I lose track of what I'm saying... My mind gets lossed in the sweet melodies that are playing... My life is split into two halves...one annoyed, the other lossed... The teeth and claws bite and scratch so I scream through jaws... I best forget these horrible things that have come to infest... But I guess thats the way I get all the pressure off my chest... Yup...she's a little fucked up...enjoy.  |
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07-04-05, 05:30 AM
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07-04-05, 07:07 PM
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Uppin' for some gawd damn feedback...
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07-04-05, 07:33 PM
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Nice Fam Havent seen you ina minute...Good shyt like always , nice imagery good feeling ,and emotions going into your drop...Nice structure very easy to read and understand...Nice shyt overall fam keep it up ...you have made talent
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08-26-05, 10:08 PM
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damn folk i gotta say diz piece here is good & came alive like a mini-movie, i like ur creativity, structure, originality, vocab, & evathang else in between u came wit it on diz 1 here..i don't understand y it'z gettin slept it'z hot as hell damn str8 fire keep writing & i would like 2 collab wit ya on a joint 1 day fa sho ~1~LUV~1~THUG~
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