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07-08-05, 04:47 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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Rap Vs Love (Chapter-Two)Ft Troop
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Troop Who is Troop? An UnMaterialistic Missphit? Well Kinda? That Close 2 a Felon?..Bodies..Yea they Gotta Find Um But Until The Realization Of Fingers United 2 Congratulate He Jus a Tad Bit 2 Late..To be able to Relate to Infatuate That Hes a Bredgrin Short of a Legend Cant Hurt Wealth Troopss So Local..that He Hasent even Hurd of His Self Lifes full of Entaglements.. like an Anaconda Sex Setting So i Constantly.. Brush Off my Past as if i was Shedding Take a Second 2. Acknowledge the Politix in our History How Quickly He Adapted to the Drasticks still a Mystery Thats Not Semi Near to being Secured.. and Embraced Because in His City..Tha Other day..Kid got De-Faced For Living in Right Time and Wrong Place is Realization Troop Refuse to Get Chalked Wrong Liked the Fabric Material....... during a ReAh.Taileration And his Soul is Dissolved and Grunged Out like Slip Knot Word is May 24th 1986..And His Mom Birthed Hip Hop Animosity Now He's Back With Chapter Two, Speaking The Truth His Life's Like A Ham, And He's Being Beaten Into Two He's Onto Rapping So Much....He's Forgot About His Kid So He's On The Verge Of Losing It If Continues His Shit And He's Confused, Cause The Rap Is Taking Over Him But He Know's He's Got To Make It.....In Order To Win And He's Got To Prove Him Self To Be A Soldier Again He's Drowning In Sorrow, But He's Way Over The Rim Dude's Admitting Everything So He's Flowing With Jim And He Feels Animosity Inside...But He's Holding It In He's Writing Chapters For Shit Cause It's A Frozen Pen The Ink Won't Eject Shit, So He End's Up Posting Again So He Ask's Jimmy P If He Could Coach An Old Friend His Skills Underrated So He Know's He's Chosen As Ten While His Girl's In The Bathroom.... Fingering Her Self He's Depressed While His Body's Lingering With Help His Kid's Screaming While Managers Trying To Job Em' He Keeps Telling His Girl Bull Shit Lying Is His Problem Cause My Girl Want Sex, But I Don't Feel Like Fucking If He Stops Writing, He'll Be A Hillbilly And Trucking His Girl Doubt Em Making It To See How His Shit Works So He's Writing Lines While Waiting Till His Kid Burps And He's On His Way To Fortune Looking To Get Signed He's Broke And They Say We Not Looking For Shit Rhymes http://community.rapverse.com/showt...eferrerid=41790 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...eferrerid=41790 |
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07-08-05, 04:51 AM
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New to RV
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u r fuckin wack dawg bring the battle pussy
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"and i dont wanna see none of my people hurt or murdered it aint worth it i cant think of a better way to word it then to just say that i love yall to much to reach the verdict so ima walkaway before it goes any further and no dont get it twisted its not a plea that im coppin im just willin to be the bigger man if yall could quit poppin off at the jaws wit the knockin cuz frankly im sick of talkin and im not gonna let someone elses coffin rest on my conscious" Eminem |
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07-08-05, 07:01 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
Get Off My Sack you Coward
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07-08-05, 11:39 AM
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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP:
this was good, i was feelin animosity's verse the most, but it was a good all around drop, keep it up
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 i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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07-08-05, 07:27 PM
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#5
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Banned: Cheating
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Weeeerdness Thanks Man
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07-08-05, 09:16 PM
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B.I.G.
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IP:
nice structure n flow....
good creativity on this shit
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07-08-05, 09:20 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
Thanks Man Weeerdnesss
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07-08-05, 09:36 PM
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IP:
dope verses
nice drop good creativity nice structure iight vocab but either way it was dope
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Get Soul Clapped...
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07-08-05, 09:41 PM
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#9
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
Thanks Dawg, Weeerdnessss
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07-09-05, 01:48 AM
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#10
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
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07-09-05, 02:24 AM
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GG Haterz
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IP:
Dang man, good shit. Troop, emotion wasn't that high and overall just failed in comparison to An's. An, wow. Amazing shit here. Good emotion, good wording, good everything. Only thing is your flow started to get mixed up.
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07-09-05, 02:32 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
Chea Man Thanks
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07-09-05, 03:13 AM
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IP:
aight im not much of a reader when it comes to readin a verse and the person puts them selfs in the 3rd person....but a great dop nun the less.
. . Troop-i found ur verse to have great vocab. rhymin words everywhere but they werent multies in ma eyes...exellent structure made it easier to read....i think that you would do good in poetry aswell.....nice drop! . Animosity-i thought that ur verse was fire after i read the first 10 lines.....it was kinda like a Stephen King Novel.....very 3rd personish but it kept me reading....and another great personal drop here again no lies no fabrication a true Open Mic.... . . 8/10 |
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07-09-05, 03:18 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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Thanks Man I Appreciate It
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07-09-05, 03:22 AM
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Seattle Hat Wit A Lean
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IP:
weerd i liked both verses....
i can relate hella to animosities...shit was mad nice... good work fellas
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