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Old 07-09-05, 01:18 AM   #1
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some shit i wrote a while ago....
don't ask me why the fuck i sound like that
don't ask me why the fuck the beat does that shit in the middle
dont ask me why the beat was runnin for so long at the end.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/jiddyjid.htm

enjoy yourselves, bitches.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2277441
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198954
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198183

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Old 07-09-05, 01:24 AM   #2
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fuck them other niggas' shit.

up.
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Old 07-09-05, 02:12 AM   #3
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quality sucks.....

beat is coo......

flow is pretty damn good......

2nd verse theres a lil part where it falls...nothin big though.......

hook is aright....pretty catchy.....

lyrically this was aright...decent...

delivery was actually pretty good.....

i was pleasently suprised with this...gpod job....just up your quality
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Old 07-09-05, 11:07 AM   #4
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okayyyy.....up.
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Old 07-09-05, 01:48 PM   #5
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Iight listening...

Beat is nice man I'm feeling the beat...Quality isnt the best...Turn ya vocals up man I can hardly hear you...Damn this shit is nice tho...Lyrics are fuckin hot man u have a nice voice...Flow is perfect man, on the whole time...Hook is decent, but can be way better...2nd verse...Flow is on again man Im really feeling this...Lyrics are hot still

Man Overall, Im mos def feeling this track

Holla for a collab if your down
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Old 07-13-05, 11:59 AM   #6
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Up, Up, Up, bitch.
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Old 07-13-05, 12:06 PM   #7
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yo im feelin this str8 up, beat is raw...ur voice dnt sound wierd, not 2 me neway....ur flow is dope u got ma head boppin, a lot of this lyrically is average...evry now n den u droppin a raw punchline...LOL @ ciara n fre lines....joker...word to this nigga, u shudda dropped like this in got skills fam....

8/10

ayo......whats the beat u use in ur mad dog diss?
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Old 07-13-05, 12:10 PM   #8
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jus noticed overlapped bar...shit was dope
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Old 07-13-05, 12:47 PM   #9
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^ Game - Hard Liquor = Beat used for Got Skillz.
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Old 07-13-05, 12:48 PM   #10
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Yea nigga I'm feelin the beat..I think ya flow is is pretty good too, ya lyrics was iight they couldve been better though, but it was decent song, just need to turn ya vocals up a little
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Old 07-13-05, 05:12 PM   #11
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beat is nice flow and delivery is on point lyrics there quality is ehh but overall this is a nice track keep doin it

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Old 07-13-05, 05:35 PM   #12
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i want to collab with you...anyway flow was nice and lyrics are nice as always
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Old 07-13-05, 08:14 PM   #13
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holla through PM if you wanna collab ppl........im ghost.
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Old 07-14-05, 11:41 AM   #14
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beat is real funky...chea

flow was nice on it too


was feelin this


stay up


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Old 07-21-05, 01:23 PM   #15
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fuck it, upped 1 last time.
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