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Nostradamus 5 83.33%
Stanza 1 16.67%
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Old 07-11-05, 11:42 PM   #1
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Stanza vs Nostradamus

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Beyond The Known


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Old 07-11-05, 11:51 PM   #2
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Yo dont do 40 lines thats overkill big time. Lets just keep our shit below 30 lines so people will actually read it.
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Old 07-11-05, 11:52 PM   #3
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I will

I Jus did that bcuz i thought you was one of them lond ass writers lol
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Old 07-12-05, 10:47 AM   #4
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Old 07-12-05, 10:47 AM   #5
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have you already checked in man /?................
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Old 07-12-05, 11:39 AM   #6
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Beyond The Known

Beyond My Wildest Dreams & Beyond My Craziest Thoughts
Past The Conclusion in My Mind That Maybe I Should Walk
Into This Place That Is Roughly, Rugged And Beyond Repair
The Place Where The Thoughts Never Really Go to Share

What They've Heard So Far From The Other Average Minds
Looking For The More Original Thought Thats One of a Kind
I've Never Had to Think about My Different Thoughts Before
Especailly Since I Kicked My Self-Conscience out The Door

I Thought That I Could Keep Them All Locked in My Head
But The Caged Thoughts Locked in my Head Sincerly Said
" I want To Be Free'd From Your Mind Let Me Loose to go Free"
Then I Replied "Only One Thought Is Keeping You from Your Flee"

Thats The Thoughts Of Murder, Envying, Drunkeness, And Emulations
Saving Up My thoughts In Sections Like I Hade a Church Congregation
So my Thoughts That are Beyond The known Want to be Free'd
They Have to Get rid Of those Blocking The Way Such as Greed

But These Thoughts are Able to Be Set free at Any Given Time
Charity, Joy, Peace, Longsuffering, and Faith Can Always Shine
In my Mind but Also out my Mind Where The Real Thoughts Roam
So I Set You All Free As of Now To ..............Beyond The Known

GoodLuck Famz!
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Old 07-12-05, 11:55 AM   #7
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Old 07-12-05, 11:59 AM   #8
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Beyond The Known

Theres a lot of things beyond whats known.
Fuck conspiracy theorys.
Check it.

Yo,


I step back.
Move you like telepathic paralax.
Mind tricks, like metal to magnets.
Surgically implanted by battle axe.
Hacking cats in the vatican, burning facts & damaging.
In-tangeble manuscripts, accurate plans thats immaculate.
Lost in a ditch effort to save humanity. by some fagget activist.
..But back to the land thats hopeless, knee deep in the dead.
...Lacking hokus pokus, were suposidly free but depend.
On people being eager to spend, half their wage in taxes.
Going to polititions in power mainly their raving actors.
With ample distractions, over-paid & close to tyrants.
Were the survivors, follow politics, but dont even like it.
Its like an irus, nailed shut but seeing through its eyelids.
Denied the right to whats rightfully ours, but we sit in silence.
Devine recitations of writings, translate to the minds of men.
Glorifying ideals, unlike truth, just important to them.
Mistaking chains & bars harshly grazed with razor scars.
Forgotton, changed re-named or flame mangled & charred.
Its breaking my heart, like a seizure weed in indonesia.
Belief & reason, but I understand why people beefing.
Intregiuing even..............To the naked eye it seems.
Beneath the edin, is a terrable sly mind of schemes.
Supplied biased dreams, through extacy, coke & weed.
Derrived forms of speed, with full force we breathe.
Report, repeat, but peace to homeless peep on the street.
The only outlaws left, in this system eager to speak.
I think--
We gotta sort the live problems before we theorise.
Leaving arcane tampering in the grave, or on the inside.
Weve been tried, humans cocky with their songs on the throne.
Just figure reality, before you go .....beyond the known.

Theres a lot of things we aint sposed to understand.
Especially since ignorance is part of the larger plan.
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Old 07-12-05, 12:44 PM   #9
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Uppin.
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Old 07-12-05, 02:01 PM   #10
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Voted For: Stanza

The flow in Stanza's bar was good and the description was deeper than that off Nostradamus. Although his rhymes were amazing, they overlapped on Nostrdamus' lyrics wich seemed out of place at some points throughout his verse.

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Old 07-12-05, 02:03 PM   #11
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Oh Damn The Votings gonna go quick Aint It ...........already got one vote LOL

im up 1-0
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Old 07-12-05, 05:30 PM   #12
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Uppin.................................Uppin....... ..............
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Old 07-12-05, 06:27 PM   #13
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checkin polls....rep that RAW woot woot
 
Old 07-12-05, 07:32 PM   #14
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booooooooooooring................................. ...
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Old 07-13-05, 01:52 AM   #15
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Stanza
Aiight Man You Came Pretty Good On This On Here Bruh, Best I've Seen Out Of You, The Imagery Was Good Here Story Line Ehh, Vocabulary Okay I Felt You Could Of Use A Little Bit Of A Better Things Being You Went From Using

What They've Heard So Far From The Other Average Minds
Looking For The More Original Thought Thats One of a Kind

THen Later At The End Of The Verse
Used
But These Thoughts are Able to Be Set free at Any Given Time
Charity, Joy, Peace, Longsuffering, and Faith Can Always Shine

Over All I Think You Had Better Imagery Better Vocabulary, The Structure Was Decent Here But Don't Seperate Shit We Know When Bars Are Up, Over All Good Imagery Man...8.5/10

Nos

Ahh Man What Happen??? I've Seen Better From You Man, Your Vocabulary Was Very Basic On THis One, Not To Mention The Structure, The First Few Lines

I step back.
Move you like telepathic paralax.
Mind tricks, like metal to magnets.
Surgically implanted by battle axe.

^Not To Well Man I Felt You've Could Of Had Better Imagery In Your Verse, You Also Had Bad Structure At Parts Which Led You Downhill On This Battle, The Best line You Had Was Your Closer Man, Looks Like You Didn't Put To Much Effort Cause I've Seen Way Better Verses From You Man ..8/10

Vote:Stanza
Cause He Had Better Imagery In His Verse, He Also Had Better Structure And Vocabulary, And The Way He Expressed It Was Much More Deep Then Nos's Part Over All No Hate Nos I've Seen Better
 
 


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