(1st Verse)
Since tha age of thirteen I've been livin' a dream,
Writin' flows so dope y'all wouldn't expect it be me,
Doin' my thing on tha mic everytime I recite,
You would have to think twice b'fo' you thought it was nice,
I'm just ill wit' tha skill and I'll get'cha man,
Prophecize my words hit'cha like tha Wu-Tang Clan,
I used to listen to B.I.G. and study on Pac,
Both were livin' gods 'til they both got shot,
My addiction only grew wit' tha years that followed,
On street corners eatin' emcees hearts wit' just one swallow,
From tha north to tha south cats know wha' I'm about,
Just burn me once kid I'ma call you out,
I'm hip hop's chosen son, (Knaledg1)
And my style's to hot to hold like tha sun,
Illmatic wit' my habit when spittin' tha static,
Attack so rapid you might as well call me an addict,
'Cuz I love tha way my rhymes cause so much confliction,
That tha only way I'll leave is if I give up my addiction.

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Alright so i thought this was a pretty nice drop... You had some nice multis in there but your structure needs a lot of work... Other than that the only thing i didnt like was that it was too short... i'd say this is about a 7/10...

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the new testamin ft. anxiety (must see)

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werd, this is a nice one, you had multi's there, aight.. nice structure n flow....
"I used to listen to B.I.G. and study on Pac" --- nice

8/10

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Bizzacckkk

Thanx fo' tha feedback much luv

Thanx Messenger I'll work on that. big up's fo' some of yer' pieces too they was dope.