http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=195869&page=3
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200396

yea dis track aint meant to be serious or nuttin just basically sum relaxed fun stuff for chillin in da sun... most stuff americans wont relate to but u know we from different countries so its all vgravy lol

http://www.ukhhf.co.uk/jamroom/bands/16/

ok slow stuff...iight im listenin..

i hear that accent...lol..iight intro's alil too long..ok come on now..spit !!..iight here ya go... nice flow...simple lyrics..mann you sound like that Craig David cat tryna rap..lol haha no offense but you rippin it...i dont know if im right but the chorus sounds like a jodeci sample..but its coo...you stood on beat the whole way through..ya lyrics was real smooth but tracks alil too simple..but its iight kid i'll give you a 6/10 iight1ne..

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respect yea it wasnt meant to be complex cos its aimed at an audience more than just hip hop fans get me so i figured if i keep it simple den hip hop heads and more pop fans will appreciate rather than just one group of people.. n its worked quite well nuff ppl round dese ends are playin it lol

listenin....lol i was gonna use that beat for sumthin
ur flow is on i just dont know wat ur sayin ...heavy accent
i cant judge em ....accent.........i think u said madi gras in there
but ur delivery seems too be on
....we dont wanna hear u peelin.....wat kind of shit is that

solid drop from wat i could understand

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LMAO, on a level, that was a wack lyric lmao


Woooord nice mellow track, left feed on ukhhf so allow doin it again ...nice track tho keep em comin

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cool.... uppin dis.........

nice drop,hot beat nd i woz feelin your lyrics throughout the whole song. lyrics not complex, but still did the job. you got my respect, 8/10.

rtf on sumthin in my sig

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safe...uppin dis.....

to da top for sleepy people

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those that know me from rb, know that accents dont bother me much at all

so unbiased feedback

peep

beats kinda dope, on some remix type shit

flows meh, could use some umph

deliverys alright, typical forgien sounding, not a bad thing, but not too good ethier

lyrics are on some laid back shit, will smith summer time shit

they alright, qualitys ok, could use some work...

work on ya flow, lyrics, and quality

other then that keep it up

The intro is hype made me wanna buss out my barbecue but it's not so nice out right now, your accent is actually a plus on this shit, I actually like this song of course I'm not actually listening to the lyrics cus I can't force myself to listen closely, but I'm hearing a lot of good stuff in thier.

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OMFG YOUR SO DOPE.

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Beat relaxed chill back...tune

lmao at "mashed"..lol where in UK are u at son?

flow- is aite, kinda emotionless, u draggin some lines but presence is cool, i dont kno but ya voice is sometimes pitched high....i dont kno how..but that kinda took ya flow out alittle..but decent track positive vibes...u did ya thang...maybe u can send me this beat...

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Beat relaxed chill back...tune

lmao at "mashed"..lol where in UK are u at son?

flow- is aite, kinda emotionless, u draggin some lines but presence is cool, i dont kno but ya voice is sometimes pitched high....i dont kno how..but that kinda took ya flow out alittle..but decent track positive vibes...u did ya thang...

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