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check it bitches, RXL aka African Royale and Chiz Aka The Whiz Kid

had heeps of fun writing to this track and recording,


a poppy song, but by no means pop in itself....just peep

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HI FI
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Top Song

hit it up and leave links to ya shit and well reply if we havint already..


meaning youll get two replys for your one when my canadian nigga chiz signs up

so drop em niggas

I guess so......it's something I guess lol, you obviously know the basics of rap I'm just not interested. Good shit for what it is though

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^^^^u 4 real!!? lol this is one of the best songs that i heard on this site, evrything about it was dope, delivery, flow, lyrics r funny, the beat is hot, original too, the quality is real good. Theres not much i could say about this drop that isnt positive, u sound like u runnin short of breath a lil tho lol, but definitely sum hot shit!

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This is my sig. what?

I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =)

I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!

beat is horrible if im bein real... typical american pop rap beat.. really cant stand it.... ur flow is ok but i wont say its dope for simple fact you punch in alot.... lyrics are simple delivery is cool sounds a little un-natural... hook is wack to be blunt..... second verse sounds like a one take u sound like u struggle for breath a few times... da entire vibe of dis track is un-original IMHO... just not my kinda music at all.. not sayin ur wack... but dis track just did nuttin for me at all... not da kinda track id listen to again... sorry bro wud like to hear u on a more original underground soundin track i reckon ud suit it more

ayo leady...this is gwen stephanies holla back girl beat....its not a rap beat....

i like tha way you flipped this...flow is nice on this, delivery is coo, except some of the punch-ins take away from it .....

hook needs to be upped....cant really hear it,

second verse flow was nice same with delivery....

overall good track

i knew it sounded familiar... but gwen fuckin sucks and da beats she uses are even worse lol

word thats the general consensus

if you liked the original beat, youll dig this

if you didint, you wont lol

thanks to all for the feed and lack there of..... and drop links if you got em and ill respond, graphics, text, poetry, anything

Rxl..lol why why why ooooooh why fam u chose this beat no no no...

With yo big ass voice....flow is on, it sounds u readin were is the emotions and sometimes yo breathin ya voice lowers damn take a rest and relax...lol but overall str8 track get at me on aim chorus- is weird...but it aite...


*its Key Rogue foooo*

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^ word ill holla, and ill check ya shit on rb and rv ina while

thanks for the feed

drop feed and links niggas!

yo, links in my sig!

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This is my sig. what?

I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =)

I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!

mannnn this fuckin beat i hate wit a passion and the original song as well but you ridin it well...nice lines here and there...only thin is that ya voice sounds alil weird...but you keepin a nice steady flow good multis too...chorus neeeds alil work and ya quality pretty good..but i think it wont hurt if you put ya vocals up a bit on the chorus and ya verses...i give this a 7.5/10 iight man Ez 1ne...

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...Bronxs Finest NUCCA!!!..FaLL BaCk ...

Your voice is the most annoying thing i heard, no offense. Your rhythm is off, the chorus sounds weird, I don‘t know what you trying to say. The other guy sounds a little better. But he sound like he can’t breathe on certain parts. “I Deliver every day like a letter in your hat.” Yeah the lyrics need to be way better than that. I give this a 4/10 you sound similar to a grown-up version of that CarsonJet boy.

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