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Old 07-25-05, 02:02 PM   #1
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Lightbulb Artik Phrost Presents:.The World is Not Flat.

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For The Topical League...Fate noshowed..So I want Feed!!!
Topic: A New Culture



.The Earth Is Not Flat.
by: Artik Phrost

...A Spitting Image With A Tangy After Taste,
Lacing Grace; Is All I See And Seem As I Look You In the Face..
...Flesh Mirrors; Appearance Reflects Ideas Opposite In Distance
And I Wonder, 'How Can A Creature Of Imagination Come Into Exsistence?'..
...My Ignorance Blockades My Curiosity Thriving Throughout Inside
Many Questions On The Demension Stepped In, 'How Does This Bend Sight?'..
...But Through My Insight I Could Tell This Was No Dream; Pure Reality
Eyes Saw A Way Of Life Dancing To Uncommon Melodies; Shatterin Previous Actuality..
...To My Surprise, The World Was No Longer Flat, But Full And Well Rounded
A New Culture Sprang Forth To Impregnate Minds And Keep Earth Diverse In Balance..
...Whats More Impressive; They've Lived Longer Than Any Of Our Guesses
Simple Ways Surpass Technical Lessons, So If Technicality Reigns It Need be Corrected..
...And Their Artifacts Not Only Show History But It Shows Us Art Is Fact
Paintings Told How People Ye' Old Grazed Gold...Proving How Much Heart I Lack..
...Irreguardless That I Will Take Back Knowledge; Understanding Of New Culture
And Sleep Well Tonight Knowing That Someone Will Catch Me As The World Turns Over..
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Old 07-25-05, 02:03 PM   #2
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Old 07-25-05, 02:12 PM   #3
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this was good, flow was good, imagery was pretty good, vocab was good, nice topic, keep it up
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Old 07-26-05, 12:14 PM   #4
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can i get more feed...i'll gladly return the favor
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Old 07-26-05, 12:49 PM   #5
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this a nice topical... you been pullin your weight adapting while RV thinks one style is best, you have a message in your work.. been droppin' work daily and each has good quality..

from this piece i was feeling:
...Whats More Impressive; They've Lived Longer Than Any Of Our Guesses
Simple Ways Surpass Technical Lessons, So If Technicality Reigns It Need be Corrected..
...And Their Artifacts Not Only Show History But It Shows Us Art Is Fact
Paintings Told How People Ye' Old Grazed Gold...Proving How Much Heart I Lack..

aight underdog, this type of stuff is why i vote you femcee of the month....
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Old 07-26-05, 12:52 PM   #6
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ayo baby this was ill!!!!!!!!!nice vocab and imagery was feelin the flow nice topic.......RTF on my OM its on my sig holla!!!!!!!!!1
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Old 07-27-05, 09:25 AM   #7
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never actually read one of your drops before but i was really feeling this one......flow was on point and no doubt you came complex with your vocab and your whole style of writing....look forward to seeing more from you.......
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