Battle Rules:

6 -10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-26-05 at 11:40 PM

Must drop verse in 1140 minutes after check in.

Bernonedown has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-26-05 11:11 PM.

Macreep has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-26-05 11:29 PM.

You shouldn't submit your verse,you should submit ya life to me
Fuckin fag,you ain't shit,ya name stating ya own capabilities
This newb could be Spiderman blinding us in the night
But we still won't feel his shit on this damn web-sight/site
He Pm me demanding I set up a battle,sayin he a lone star
Well we can tell ya lonely kid,based on the fact ya so bizzare
I seen his past battles,and like a English teacher,he spits paragraphs
Cause him spittin naked in front women is only way he gets laughs


Keyed verse in 5 minutes....still KO'n this prick

so i cant battle, and snakes dont rattle, and little girls dont tattle......whats a matta? u cant handle the pressure....maybe have a chat with rap artist uncle nestor..... and maybe u can pleasure the better half of never never land...loan them ur left hand...cause i know u want ur right, so u can shove it in ur tight....i think i'll stop there u can fill in the blank, and not only that but ur verse is less than rank...over here, u might get shanked.....i think im done having fun with this pun and now i know that u cant beat me or defeat me so dont try to meet me cause i know u cant compete with me

hahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahaha hahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OK.............man.......outta curiousity son.....who did you beat for that one win???

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Voted For: Macreep

this was a super weak verse. but you still got it.. you need alot of work your rhyme scheme was alright . just work on your punches more. your set up for alot of stuff was weak ....your punches need a ton of work as well. work on that
bernonedown.. work on your shit your structure was off the whole time its pretty obvious what you did wrong your rhyme scheme was eh your metas were none and you need to work on your punches and set up....

Vote//Macreep....RTF

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