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07-31-05, 06:11 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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"All That I Got Is You"
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*piano plays*
[Hook] All that I got is you...... And I thank god that we made thru. All that I got is you........ And I'm so grateful I made it thru. [Verse1:Tony Green] Were do I start, growing up the family fell apart. Not talkin to each other over money and cars. It was me my 2 brothers grandma and my mother. Wish I could see my mother just to tell her that I love her. Cause in 1996 it was a hard year Found out my mother died couldn't shed no tears. Cause I had to be strong for the family and others. Gotta show'em the ropes and take care of my little brother. It was hard every month waiting at the aid office. Grandma workin 2 jobs to pay for my mothers coffin. Its was hard till I grew up and I found the streets. Shackey introduced me into money and weed. On the block was serving phens I knew I was a begginer. My pops in Dwight locked in the correctional center. And his son on the block following his footsteps. I had to do something for money cause we had none left.(What) [Hook] All that I got is you...... And I thank god that we made thru. All that I got is you........ And I'm so grateful I made it thru. [Verse2:Tony Green] I had no remorst.... I had none and any fears. After grandma got laid off after workin for 20 years. We was on one foot and it was quickly breaking. But words couldn't explain the type of money I'm making. So I lied to my grandma told I had got a job. Working at Jewel and it almost broke my heart. I gave her the 2 thousand that I had saved up. Told her, her baby boy was makin money and I had came up. I never to lied to my grandma till that day. I had to make a sacrifice lie or don't have a place to stay. So every 2 weeks I brought her at least a stack. We moved up like the Jefferson's from me runnin and slangin packs. But I'll never forget that day and the face I had scene. When she got that call sayin we got your son Tony Green. I felt like I had broke her heart hurt her real bad. And it hurt her even more when I was in the same place as my dad. I'm sorry grandma..... but I made it thru. And the only person I have to thank for it is you.(cause) [Hook] All that I got is you...... And I thank god that we made thru. All that I got is you........ And I'm so grateful I made it thru. *piano plays and fades out* http://community.rapverse.com/showt...0332post2330332 Last edited by Tony Green : 07-31-05 at 06:18 PM. |
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07-31-05, 06:14 PM
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Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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IP:
thats hot, emotion is powerful, flows real good. nice drop fam
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07-31-05, 06:17 PM
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^^Thanxx ~B~ good lookin uppin this right here is some powerful shit and should be OM of the month plus this is a true story!
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07-31-05, 07:59 PM
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uppim to the top!
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07-31-05, 08:28 PM
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Still The Dopest Alive
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This was a solid piece, the emotion was good. You got deep into the story and you stayed on track with it. Only think i didnt like was the hook, it was too simple. But other than that you did your thing here.
Good OM 8/10
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07-31-05, 08:31 PM
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Thanxx good looking uppin!!!!
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07-31-05, 11:07 PM
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Uppin to the top quit sleepin!
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07-31-05, 11:27 PM
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Ill Nigga Alert.
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IP:
Hmmmm...Overall nice piece i thought here...Concept and topic were good...Vocab was good...Imagery was also good...Had alot of emotion...so overall-7.5/10...Keep up the good work...
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07-31-05, 11:48 PM
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Thanxx uppin to the top!
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08-01-05, 02:18 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
im really feelin this dawg...tight peace nice emotion good flow i feel ya keep progressin, and return the favor on my open mice.....7/10
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08-01-05, 12:44 PM
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**the council**
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this was a good piece....i actually liked the hook and i felt that in those four lines you managed to display a lot of emotion....you came deep with this and i could tell that you wrote it from the heart.......one thing i will say though is that you need to work on your rhyming because some words didn't rhyme as well as they could have.....also need to work on your flow 7/10
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08-01-05, 03:10 PM
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I thought my flow was decent o'well uppin!
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08-01-05, 11:24 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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Uppin to the top!!!!!
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08-02-05, 06:18 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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Up Up and away!
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08-02-05, 06:27 PM
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got u all confused n shit
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I like this track emotion is powerful makes me think you whipped......naw juss playin Green look this was nice though keep it up....
rtf drop feed on the open mic in my sig
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