DISS TO TROOP

TROOP your rhyme affair lame like a bad airplane you
Can’t take off you fake and soft like sponge cake I’ll slew
You like Cain done Abel rhymes are plain and unstable no class
Need change for a dollar while I rearrange your collar fast
Pollute your scheme and trends like disputes between friends
Nobody wins this settlement, eat fruit drink Jim Beam and gins
TROOP you a slut loco need a true cup of coco I really suggest
You call Nestles Quick because my mess is sick, your style get molest
Your beckoning gestures is wrecking textures like a bad hair do
You write false and you like white sauce don’t spread on bread true
Somebody misled you like General Custer at Little Big Horn
You getting slaughtered need a rope to secure your quotes scorned
Even with pure soap you couldn’t clean that trash you write no adorn
In that, you soft with pudding feet no wooden cleat so how can you run
Dunn? You’ll fall on your face all a disgrace to Hip Hop just a bum

...Do you even actually think you make sense, mad?

TROOP your rhyme affair lame like a bad airplane you
Can’t take off you fake and soft like sponge cake I’ll slew
Wow, what a good punch. Comparing rhymes to airplanes, wow.

You like Cain done Abel rhymes are plain and unstable no class
Need change for a dollar while I rearrange your collar fast
What can I say, this is dope x infinity. Like Cain killed Abel, rhymes are plain and unstable...how could something plain be unstable? And how is that a proper comparison?

Pollute your scheme and trends like disputes between friends
Nobody wins this settlement, eat fruit drink Jim Beam and gins
Gins and friends doesn't rhyme...eat fruit drinks...word.

TROOP you a slut loco need a true cup of coco I really suggest
You call Nestles Quick because my mess is sick, your style get molest
This makes a lot of sense. Troop is a male-slut who escaped from the asylum and needs a good cup of cocoa or some tea to bring him back to reality. In the mean time, he needs to call the manufacture of Nestles Quick instant chocolate milk because Maddrapper got the flu, and his style is a physical manifestation somehow that was good enough to be molested.

Your beckoning gestures is wrecking textures like a bad hair do
You write false and you like white sauce don’t spread on bread true
...How would a gesture in real life wreck what you type?
...so...people are supposed to be like butter and spread across bread?

Somebody misled you like General Custer at Little Big Horn
You getting slaughtered need a rope to secure your quotes scorned
Even with pure soap you couldn’t clean that trash you write no adorn
Man, I'm not going to bother with the total shittiness of this bar. ]...I'm sorry, but I don't remember seeing anyone using a bar of soap(pure soap, even) to rub on garbage to make it cleaner.

In that, you soft with pudding feet no wooden cleat so how can you run
Dunn? You’ll fall on your face all a disgrace to Hip Hop just a bum
And people need wooden shoes to run now? Jesus Christ, maddrapper, stop fucking acting like you're 'dope with some attitude'. Can you honestly call calling someone a disgrace and a bum without any punches or wordplay will be a decent punch? Multis don't win everything, espcially when they DON'T MAKE FUCKING SENSE.

Daemon thanks for breaking down and finding nothing wrong man get life and learn how to be dope HA! HA! HA!

Lmao, can't believe you're serious.

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vs. -UNF-..

hey yall better take notes all my punches are brand new and yall couldn't think of punches like that your shit all played out

Yeah, your shit is 'brand new' and 'not played out', because it doesn't make sense and no other rapper but you would fucking put such stupid bullshit in their verses. Seriously, read my feedback. Stop taking feedback like a little bitch and use it to improve, you're getting on my fucking nerves making one verse after another full of the same 'unplayed' shit that doesn't make sense, with no PUNCHES at all, even though you claim it is. Seriously, man, those aren't punches. Saying someone has pudding feet and aren't wearing wooden cleats so they can't run isn't a punch, it's fucking stupid and doesn't even make sense.

But of course, being the ignorant twat you are, you'll probably say 'you're just hating' or 'you're not a true rapper', like you actually think you are. Everyone on this site laughs at you, and everyone else hates you. So why don't do you just leave and make everyone happy?

yo shit was good and didnt make kno sense ta me neitha

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Daemon my shit up over your head you write poetry no place for you in rapk now show me you can match these punchlines obviously you can't just read and eat you heart out for real this is how its done

Read my newest thread and we'll see how hard it is to 'rap'.

Daemon i read it what you done was let your hate get in the way and there is nothing creative or new in that post to make a long story short it sucked homey

man...coulda been better....but yo.....lol...if ya was gonna diss troop...ya could of called me and we would have collabed to diss that homo.ROFL

But the diss wasn't hot.Just being honest.

Maddrapper...what I did was generally post a lot of bullshit that didn't make sense like you do. It wasn't 'clouded with hate', it was written because I was shaking with laughter and could barely think because you're so fucking stupid. What I put wasn't played, because it doesn't make sense, and that's your moto, isn't it?

my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202522)

soul clap hoe

yo macreep it was becuse it has no played out punchlines plus it told troop he was subpar like a mother fucker so it got people dandruff for real yo