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un-fuck-widable has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-05 01:30 PM.

McRhyma has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-05 01:47 PM.

Starting by quoting your name, is lame, hitting you wit subliminals
My aim in this game, is to spit rage, like an animal
Like a pity the full, I'll destroy ya, if ya ain't careful
You can try and be influential, that ain't hopeful
Your Rhymes Are Pre-Pay, Probably bought them off Ebay
I spit a real MC-way, while you spit the queer he/she-way
Your ego needs deflated, stop ya from getting hurt
Fuck a reality check, you need brought bak down to earth
With a bang, not from a gun or knifes
There is more than one way to destroy your life
Don't you ever say in your raps, you get crunk in da club
Coz you're even too young, for the mickey mouse club
As you see me, I always walk around with my own paramedic
Coz I spit so much sick, I could die on ma own vomit
This battle ain't even a competition coz I ain't that exhausted
To be honest you suprised me with how long you've lasted

Callin me out?,kid you got balls and ya brave
You culd be a 'coupon'but ya still cudnt be 'saved'
Im too lyrical,Rhyma watch out wen i spit hard
Your a 'dumb fuck'like havin sex wit 'retards'
IDGAF im overall the lyrical champ wen its text
I got a win on my last 10 battles,foo' u next*
You suck,battlin you,your wastin my time fag
Its like im a robber,cuz i got this in the'bag'
Your flows wack,ur raps weak,ur overall a herb
You'll lose this 'brawl' like in ny in a redsox shirt..

*IDGAF is his secret code

sos i came shit im tired an i got lot of shit on ma mind anway upping...

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OYD MAFIA

upping for votes vote n i will rtf......................

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OYD MAFIA

Voted For: un-fuck-widable

i think un-fuck-widable got dis one because he had betta punches, and overall betta wordplay, he also had a little betta flow den mc Rhyma, and way betta structure

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Voted For: un-fuck-widable

Callin me out?,kid you got balls and ya brave
You culd be a 'coupon'but ya still cudnt be 'saved'
aight opener 5/10
Im too lyrical,Rhyma watch out wen i spit hard
Your a 'dumb fuck'like havin sex wit 'retards'
....lol....6/10
IDGAF im overall the lyrical champ wen its text
I got a win on my last 10 battles,foo' u next*
aight dotn get selfglory there.....4/10
You suck,battlin you,your wastin my time fag
Its like im a robber,cuz i got this in the'bag'
aight nice 6/10
Your flows wack,ur raps weak,ur overall a herb
You'll lose this 'brawl' like in ny in a redsox shirt..
aight thats a good closer6/10
23/50

vs.

Starting by quoting your name, is lame, hitting you wit subliminals
My aim in this game, is to spit rage, like an animal
dont rhyme wack opener 2/10
Like a pity the full, I'll destroy ya, if ya ain't careful
You can try and be influential, that ain't hopeful
still dont rhymes 2/10
Your Rhymes Are Pre-Pay, Probably bought them off Ebay
I spit a real MC-way, while you spit the queer he/she-way
kinda good 4/10
Your ego needs deflated, stop ya from getting hurt
Fuck a reality check, you need brought bak down to earth
aight good 5/10
With a bang, not from a gun or knifes
There is more than one way to destroy your life
ok....4/10
Don't you ever say in your raps, you get crunk in da club
Coz you're even too young, for the mickey mouse club
wack dont rhyme wit tha same word man unless the punch its dope 2/10
As you see me, I always walk around with my own paramedic
Coz I spit so much sick, I could die on ma own vomit
dont rhyme 2/10
This battle ain't even a competition coz I ain't that exhausted
To be honest you suprised me with how long you've lasted
dont rhyme....2/10
23/80.....

This verse is one sided v/ goes to unfuckwidable jus a better verse wit better punches other kid didnt even rhyme.....and bad punches too......
v/unfuckwidable
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PLZ RTF WIT A HONEST VOTE IN MY BATTLES IN SIG OR VOTE GETS DQUED.......

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Voted For: un-fuck-widable

un-fuck-widable

Callin me out?,kid you got balls and ya brave
You culd be a 'coupon'but ya still cudnt be 'saved'
4. Decent.
Im too lyrical,Rhyma watch out wen i spit hard
Your a 'dumb fuck'like havin sex wit 'retards'
3. Played.
IDGAF im overall the lyrical champ wen its text
I got a win on my last 10 battles,foo' u next*
2. Just a wack statement.
You suck,battlin you,your wastin my time fag
Its like im a robber,cuz i got this in the'bag'
3. Played wordplay again.
Your flows wack,ur raps weak,ur overall a herb
You'll lose this 'brawl' like in ny in a redsox shirt..
4. Decent. Could have been worded better though.

Overall - 16

McRhyma

Starting by quoting your name, is lame, hitting you wit subliminals
My aim in this game, is to spit rage, like an animal
0. Animals don't spit rage. What are you talking about?
Like a pity the full, I'll destroy ya, if ya ain't careful
You can try and be influential, that ain't hopeful
2. Just a statement.
Your Rhymes Are Pre-Pay, Probably bought them off Ebay
I spit a real MC-way, while you spit the queer he/she-way
0. Ok? Just another statement.
Your ego needs deflated, stop ya from getting hurt
Fuck a reality check, you need brought bak down to earth
3. Concept had potential. Your wording sucked though.
With a bang, not from a gun or knifes
There is more than one way to destroy your life
0. Just another statement.
Don't you ever say in your raps, you get crunk in da club
Coz you're even too young, for the mickey mouse club
2. Concept had minimal potential, but potential nonetheless.
As you see me, I always walk around with my own paramedic
Coz I spit so much sick, I could die on ma own vomit
0. Self glorifying is wack.
This battle ain't even a competition coz I ain't that exhausted
To be honest you suprised me with how long you've lasted
2. Concept had potential. Worded terribly.

Overall - 9

Vote - un-fuck-widable

Voted For: McRhyma

UNF had quite a few played punches, but he had better punches overall. McRhyma had very nice flow, and a couple of alright punches, but basically his flow and his wording got this in my opinion.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

another unexplained vote^^................................

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OYD MAFIA

uppin............................................. ............

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OYD MAFIA

Voted For: un-fuck-widable

UNF had some good punches but McRhyma didn't really any really decent punches in his rhyme
it was also easier to catch the flow with UNF's

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Voted For: un-fuck-widable

this was a weak battle neitha came hard at all but UNF came harder wit the punches and his structure was good alone wit flow MCrhyma flow wit off at times and his punches were really weak vocab was good doe
v/UNF

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