Battle Rules:

8-12 lines
no dick
no hate
no crew
votes..

lets do this..

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-04-05 at 12:26 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

AITZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-05 11:58 PM.

chyeah i gotta laugh at this cat 4 gettin laughed off stage,
u claim to be hard holdin a bat, leavin nothin but a graze,
i'll take ur life with an alterment fight, re-claimin the name young blaze,
put a smoke in ur mouth with ur noze blocked, lets see some hair flame,
almost choked, when ur boys got chopped, by this aussie fighter,
i can see u wishin u stopped, b4 u said u was down 4 this mic igniter..
slightly droppin these lyrics as u try n think 4 a verse,
devourin bitchs as my rhymes intend to hurt,
young blaze had a sex change n is still sufferin from stitchers
ugly frame with no body change, just implants that are dirty like his dishes,
wash n keep ur self clean before u step to this street machine,
u claim hard n untend to fight mean, but get ur ass out there n make me some green

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Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 12:07 AM.

As I Split-Parts Wit War Axes And Rip Hearts From Thoraxes
Bastard Only Blaze Punches' When I Leave MY Fists Parked..........
.................................................. ........In His Chloric Acid
I'll Rearrange Your Face Like A Blind Plastic Surgeon
Using Sexual Words When I Violate This Fag Like A Catholic Virgin
U Took This Fight In Haste Now I'll Leave u Shook With Life Erased
Nobody's Gonna 'Bite' Ur Verse Because It Looks Just Like It Tastes
Make You Appear On 'Ricki Lake' Lookin Like A 'Battered Wife
The Only Thing You'll 'Beat Me In' Is A 'Race To Tha After Life
Begin To Hurt Yo Tha Punches Make Bruises And Ya Skin Go Purple
Fire 4 Shells Like Tha Teenage Mutant Ninja-Turtles Thiz Battle.....
..................................1 Sided Like Been Ina Circle
Wonderin Like Blind Musicians Get A Deal?...u Couldn’t Get Signed Wit Petitions
u Put On A Front Like Kind Politicians And u Couldn’t Find A Line.....
......................... If You *Phoned* An Electrician

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Voted For: Young Blaze

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ight....look like a quick battle here by both

FLOW-It was meh by both emcees.Blaze had better structure but lines were a bit stretched and it seemed like you tried to hide it with dots.

PUNCHES-Again...it was meh by both.But Aitz was basic.Some of his lines didn't seem to belong....every line must either be a set-up or punch.

PERSONALS-I don't recall any by Blaze and only one by the other guy which was weak.

MULTIS-Aitz had a basic one sllyable rhyme.Blaze had ok multis which beats none.

CREATIVITY-Blaze...aitz had nutin that eye opening or nutin.Neither did blaze....but his verse actually looked like they had time spend on makin it.


Vote-Blaze(vote in link above)

You know...i hope this ain't ya best.The way sixth sense was building you up and shit.

CREATIVITY-Blaze...aitz had nutin that eye opening or nutin.Neither did blaze....but his verse actually looked like they had time spend on makin it.


pre-typed. thats all i gotta say about it

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Voted For: Young Blaze

AITZ

chyeah i gotta laugh at this cat 4 gettin laughed off stage,
u claim to be hard holdin a bat, leavin nothin but a graze,
2. No punch. Your set up had nothing to do with what should have been the punch.
i'll take ur life with an alterment fight, re-claimin the name young blaze,
put a smoke in ur mouth with ur noze blocked, lets see some hair flame,
2. Just another statement.
almost choked, when ur boys got chopped, by this aussie fighter,
i can see u wishin u stopped, b4 u said u was down 4 this mic igniter..
0. Self glorifying is wack. No punch.
slightly droppin these lyrics as u try n think 4 a verse,
devourin bitchs as my rhymes intend to hurt,
1. Intending does not win battles.
young blaze had a sex change n is still sufferin from stitchers
ugly frame with no body change, just implants that are dirty like his dishes,
2. Played wordplay, but at least it was a slight punch.
wash n keep ur self clean before u step to this street machine,
u claim hard n untend to fight mean, but get ur ass out there n make me some green
0. Wack statement. Has nothing to do with battles.

Overall - 7

Young Blaze

As I Split-Parts Wit War Axes And Rip Hearts From Thoraxes
Bastard Only Blaze Punches' When I Leave MY Fists Parked..........
.................................................. ........In His Chloric Acid
2. Just a statement. Structure doesn't fit the punch.
I'll Rearrange Your Face Like A Blind Plastic Surgeon
Using Sexual Words When I Violate This Fag Like A Catholic Virgin
3. Played wordplay. Attempted punch.
U Took This Fight In Haste Now I'll Leave u Shook With Life Erased
Nobody's Gonna 'Bite' Ur Verse Because It Looks Just Like It Tastes
4. Decent shit.
Make You Appear On 'Ricki Lake' Lookin Like A 'Battered Wife
The Only Thing You'll 'Beat Me In' Is A 'Race To Tha After Life
8. Lmao. This was dope.
Begin To Hurt Yo Tha Punches Make Bruises And Ya Skin Go Purple
Fire 4 Shells Like Tha Teenage Mutant Ninja-Turtles Thiz Battle.....
..................................1 Sided Like Been Ina Circle
3. You need to work on this structure. It doesn't fit with your punches.
Wonderin Like Blind Musicians Get A Deal?...u Couldn’t Get Signed Wit Petitions
u Put On A Front Like Kind Politicians And u Couldn’t Find A Line.....
......................... If You *Phoned* An Electrician
6. Pretty good. A little forced, but still, pretty good.

Overall - 26

Vote - Young Blaze

Voted For: Young Blaze

fuckin god...sorry aitz i think you lost this one man

YoungBlaze flowed better, his punches were vicious(personal and metaphor) the way it was structured i didn't honestly think it would flow better but it did.
I overall i enjoyed it more....i mean damn!

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Child Of Chaos

Voted For: Young Blaze

v/Young blaze

Young b just had better lyrics and had a punch in all his lines, this made it more humerous and interesting to read.

AITZ good lyrics had a few ok punches but not good enough to beat blaze.

So i vote blaze

Voted For: Young Blaze

AITZ had some weird played stuff, that didn't hit very hard with some alright wordplay and some fake personals. Blaze had a decent flow, with some good imagery and a couple of decent punches like the electrician one.