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Check in by: 08-05-05 at 01:09 AM

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PhreeNapdizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-05 12:40 AM.

Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-05 12:42 AM.

Alright..

A nervous new-commer's (me) battlin a worthless jew-from-earth..
Get ready to-dispurse damage fines when i spew-this-verse..
Quick question tho.. is that you on ur display case?
with the name "young blaze" right on that gay face?/
tryn' to be a monster, showin off your teeth huh?
your so scary that im hiding under sheets.. fuck/
you bout' to see me work some magic on your silly grin
just go and tell me.. "here! little hill billy, sin!"/
how.much.would-you give me if i let my willy win..
itll make you stop looking like "milly vanilly" did../
Sor-ry if you got the wrong responses from your mommy..
but if you really think your any good, you really got me.. /
i got something that should help, this waund a.k.a. shottie
itll make you crazier than John. comma last name Gotti/
What I didnt mention earlier's im Italian-fool..
and just like in the movie Rocky, little-stallion-rulled../
so from this point on im gonna claim that im betta'
cuz i never roll up my joints wrong wearin my van-detta/
and just for this extra space ill let ya place somethin special..
race to give me feedback blaze, dont get to sentimental



Explanations (if needed i guess) -

"get ready to dispurse damage fines when i spew this verse" - the verse can cause damage that he would have to dispurse (pay for) after it.

The thing about his look.. thats based off of the picture or symbol or whatever that is he has as his signature..

"just go and tell me.. "here! little hill billy, sin!" - a lot of people combine being white with being a hick, so you could say im stabbin myself with that one.. but i dont see it that way

"how much would u give me if i let my willy win" - i dont need to rap or type to beat this guy... my dick (willy) can do it by itself.. this was more of a filler.. you can get me on that if u want.

"and just for this extra space..." - that whole bit was said cuz i was gonna end it.. but i just decided to put one more in.. so i called it extra space

** I really didnt need to give an explanation did I? lemme no in the feedback...

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Ight Check it A fast one......
Ima Master of Speech With Faster Heat I got My Craft To a T
My Punches Power has 'No LImits'...Look How I Master P
fists explore ya dome and my “feet” smash ya Face
I got ya friends looking At u for signs of life like NASA in Space
Text Complex Like Perplexed Vocab And Switched Up Like Re-Versed .................................................. ...Notations
u Re-HEARSE Death Like Vexed Souls, Leave My .............
.....................................Definitions In Quotations
I thought u were gonna be better than this but all ur shit stank
if u supposed ta be the cream of the crop....................
..................................then the harvest must shoot blanks
foreal tho, ya rhymes r bad an next to This they aint good by far
can't “kill me” when his only “lethal weapons” is stuck in his Vcr
Follow My Jams Im Making Im Waisting Tracks Like RuthLess Drivers
Ya Words are Beneath Flow's like Conversations with Scuba Divers
I'll SHatter ya SPeech Tragically Watch as I Burn Ya Camp bro
My Text Will 'Drop P' Like "Clumsy Doctors with Piss Samples
Death Is Dark An u will wittness It.....yah body is a land Mark
I"m Droppin "Free"(Phree) From The Air Like Owners Of 106 N Park

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Im feelin that verse.. you got a lot of shit going on tho.. its hard for me to remember it all..

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Voted For: Young Blaze

Young blaze-Good vocab for real.Flow and structure was godd.Though the dots could be trimmed down a little bit.Your best line was the cream of the crop/harvest one.What I think you could calm down with is the self glorifing.A lot of bars were you talking about yourself.But you did have bars that hit well.Like that 106n Pk personal a lot too.

PhreeNapdizzle-Man....your verse lacked punches.Damn.OK...here's what...leave multis alone till you get good at coming up with punches.And more personals would be nice.That first bar is the epotome of forced multis."tryna be a monster,showin off your teeth"?....c'mon...what kinda punch is that?.

Vote-Young Blaze
RTF BELOW PLEASE
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203256

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Voted For: Young Blaze

Aii '

Young Blaze
Your Verse Was Nuttin Short Of Spectatcular ............You Started off With Some Good Wordplay and Then You Came Wit Your Punchez that had Some Original Concept And They Came at Certian Areas That Took Your Openents Verse Down The Drain Fastly And Hastly ............Then You Ended Correctly And That Made Your Verse Look Like the Strong Point Of This Battle So I had To Give This battle To You Because Really You did Come Out On The Top Of this Battle

[size=5]Please RTF In mY battle In my Sig

Phree
Aii Man Your Verse was Very Long Yet Each Of Your Lines were very Short Shall I say It Like that you Had some punchez but they were basic and just droppin what I Already heard from somewhere else and that made your verse look that much more unoriginal So I couldnt Give my vote to you in This Battle man

Please RTF Honestyly In My battle in my Sig No Hate votes please

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Voted For: Young Blaze

Structure-PhreeNapDizzle, had better flowing verse.......young blaze ya structure was all over the place man up on that

Vocab-Young Blaze, neither had good vocab but through out young blazes verse he had some good vocab goin for him

Personals-PhreeNapDizzle had more appealing personals to me...young blaze up on that make it more appealing

Punches-Young Blaze, deffinitlley had hard hitting punches through out the verse, Phreenapdizzle your rhymes were played for the most part, not hating just stating a fact.

Multis-Phreenapdizzle....I was feelin his multis more i felt he had ones that affected his verse, Young blaze up on ya multis it can only make you better.Didnt see much multis from you

Originality-Young Blaze, he had more fresh verse had everything on point for the most part, Phree like i said before...Wasnt really feelin ur verse, no hate man

V/YOUNG BLAZE

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OH yea for phreenapdizzle, u shouldnt have to explain ur personals/punches