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Old 08-06-05, 06:26 AM   #1
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Lost Memories
Silence got me by my ear in my own Dream
Petrified by its touch, feeling like a cloned Scheme
Playing me into the impossible of a Memory
Nothing dead, but I feel as I’m in a Cemetery

Grown up a troubled youth, still stuck in my Reality
Terrorism my fear, without luck in my Personality
Leaving my nightmare, disputed by its Scripture
Hesitation from its scare, confused by a Picture
No limitations in my flow, remarkable by Facts
As the light shines, Christ is watching me Relax
No fractions to fix, never a twist in Subtraction
No vibration in frustration, a mist in Levitation
Proved stress in less time, a clock could Pause
What should cause, a bouquet of flowers in a Vase
Nice scenery in a vision, full of dirt and Dust
Nothing clean, a beam of light burned my Lust
No misconception, a wrist broken from Swinging
A heart easily calm, by a smooth voice Singing
Created by a choice, just to follow what Inspired
Unable to be hired, questioned by the Unfired
Law got money off a chain, no game in Cocaine
Why deal to get a meal, the emotion shows Shame
Living a measurement, a stain you couldn’t Clean
A stressful scene, so obscene it maintains its Steam
Money on they’re glock’s, gangsters got it Wrong
No self destruction, by expressing oneself Strong
My pain resorts in a file, no style in what I Expect
Just to no I’m correct, a suspect in what I Intercept
A love to hate, lots of people know most is Evil
A aggression to hold a mic, to let it go so Lethal
The instinct can effect, by making you feel Incorrect
Provided with a list, leading the po to the Insect
Even I had to ask, whats the task for me to Live
Then run and hide, bonifide with nothing to Give

Silence got me by my ear in my own Dream
Petrified by its touch, feeling like a cloned Scheme
Playing me into the impossible of a Memory
Nothing dead, but I feel as I’m in a Cemetery
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Old 08-06-05, 06:32 AM   #2
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Old 08-06-05, 02:16 PM   #3
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uhhm, pretty dope'n shit, try though uh, more multies and stuff like that, werdddd
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Old 08-06-05, 03:51 PM   #4
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yea i didnt focus on multiples here.

idk why i didnt i should of
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Old 08-09-05, 03:30 AM   #5
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uppin for feed fuck!
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Old 08-09-05, 03:36 AM   #6
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Good Piece Son Alot Of Emotion In Here The Imagery Was Nice Man, Rhyme Scheme Was Meh Vocabulary Was Dope Yo Nice Use In Words And Met's Yo Keep Thios Up
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Old 08-09-05, 04:10 AM   #7
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thanks

lol at me not tryin in this one

uppin for more
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Old 08-09-05, 01:55 PM   #8
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Pretty Nice..
Flow was nice, Multis lacked.. Concept was dope. Overall a pretty solid peace..

RTF- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203343
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Old 08-09-05, 01:58 PM   #9
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Nice peace right here, felt the emotion......vocab was iight nothing to complain about.....structure helped me get a good flow goin nice job! pretty solid piece 7.5/10.....up on multis.......RTF ON MY SIG LINKS 1
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Old 08-10-05, 12:05 AM   #10
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lol @ people, i'll work wit good multiples then no one will look on me about them, then i dont do it and they want me too, fuckin people.

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Old 08-10-05, 11:47 PM   #12
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this was good, flow and structure were good, imagery and emotion were there too, really good drop, keep it up man
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Old 08-11-05, 03:27 PM   #13
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thanks a lot, i appreciate the feed,

uppin

i will rtf so leave links people
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Old 08-11-05, 03:35 PM   #14
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Damn @ the vocab lol.......this was pretty deep man...i really liked this.....you should put this on audio mos def.......the imagery was goood....it was just a dope peice....i dunno what else to say about it
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Old 08-11-05, 03:37 PM   #15
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damn pretty dope shyt man... much props... well yeah very good vocab.. flow was on point.. good imagery and everything was jst perfect..

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