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08-15-05, 03:44 PM | #1 | ||
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"Your Last Night" Devin ft Tony Green
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Red=Devin
Green=Tony Green [Talking:Tony Green] Yeah alot of niggaz run they mouth about me and were I'm from but until you've seen niggaz get jumped for they new kicks 10 niggaz sittin on a porch waiting for a nigga to look at them funny then holla at me cause I'm from the hood.... [Verse1evin] can you get through poverty while puttin the killin, stealin-away When you can make a dollar out of 15 cents with out comitin-crimes Is it predicting-lies, or lieing, lookin in the devils sinnin-eyes for girls is it winnin-guys, or guys winnin them over or when you can alwas be drunk while stayin sober what about the goverment givin-some-power-to-the-gays well my real life is what im livin-every-hour-of-the-days [Verse1:Tony Green] I'm the interlectual type so my mind stay wiery. Theories in my head on how to make these hoes feel me. Can;t respect a lier cause a lier can't be trusted. Commit a crime with him next day I'm getting busted. I done been crushed with...gun shots and knife wounds. Done had nights when my head spinning like a typhoon. Morning night or noon gotta deal with these fools. Abid by all the rules life changin real soon. [Hook:Tony Green & Devin]repeat2x I got a nine on my waist and a blount in my mouth. Anyhting lookin fierce shit I'm airing it out. And everynight I pray erase my sins from the past. Cause you never know when a night might be your very last. [Verse2:Tony Green & Devin] I cant help it when my mind ghostwrites-for-my-hands and i love all the e-mails and post-writes-from-my-fans Back by popular demand, p-poppin on handstands. In the hood you get crushed like coke or beer cans. thats real life when people from all over give-you-love Now i got fans from across the world my fam's buildin-up And I gotta stay up... represent for the block. A nigga done got rocked, couldn't kill me with one shot i do what a dealer-doese, give you a lil-then-charge Gettin money like bank cards, roll with me play your part. for these lines that i stop the cuss in i still-been-hard Can't repsect you snitch niggaz you pussy from the start. forgive me for this sin-god, im goin through a real-life if i was real-tight you would think i'd get a deal-right I hustle every night to keep food on my table. Cain in my hand gettin money is always able. problem is im still-white, labels only care bout-ya-look Try to play you by the book, think guards will leave you shook. they dont care about your lyrics only if you shout-ya-hook Aint gone let me work for money then yours gettin took. [Hook:Tony Green & Devin]repeat2x I got a nine on my waist and a blount in my mouth. Anyhting lookin fierce shit I'm airing it out. And everynight I pray erase my sins from the past. Cause you never know when a night might be your very last. [Endingevin] i wonder why the heck do you even bother readin this about my life when you dont know what your real life is http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203820 Last edited by Tony Green : 08-15-05 at 03:59 PM. |
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08-15-05, 04:00 PM | #2 | ||
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iight uppin fo feed hot drop here!
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08-15-05, 07:19 PM | #3 | ||
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i like diz piece u 2 collab well 2getha i could feel ya emotion thru-out & tha creativity, concept, structure & vocab was up 2 par keep writing dat real shit fa sho 9.5/10
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08-16-05, 07:01 PM | #4 | ||
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Thanks Mayn Uppin For Some More Feed
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08-17-05, 10:47 AM | #5 | ||
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uppin to the top some real shit!
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08-17-05, 12:47 PM | #6 | ||
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uppin to the top!
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08-17-05, 01:25 PM | #7 | ||
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A niceeee drop.....concept was good.......vocab was aight also was the structure!!!!
Just try to make ya vocab more complex!!!! 7.5/10 Plz could you rtf on the OM at the bootom of my sig!!!! |
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08-17-05, 02:10 PM | #8 | |
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dope shit fam...keep it up...was feeling the flow and vocab...nice imagery...keep it up niggas.......8/10.....RTF...link in mah sig.......
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08-17-05, 04:32 PM | #9 | ||
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Thanxx favors will be returned uppin!
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08-17-05, 09:29 PM | #10 | ||
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Uppin to the top!
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08-17-05, 11:54 PM | #11 | |
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this joint was pretty tight, i was feelin both of yall flows. i like how you did the lil switch off thing. went kiss and styles wit it. only thing i would say is maybe put some mutlies in the verse to switch it up a lil more. but overall i give it an 8/10.
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08-18-05, 12:08 AM | #12 | ||
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Favor returned still uppin!
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08-18-05, 01:16 PM | #13 | ||
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real nice flows went well together good concept work on developing it more tho fam....good emotion use more vocab tho ....0_o anyweays overall:v.nice erm 8/10
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08-18-05, 01:31 PM | #14 | ||
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Thanxx foe good lookin!
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08-18-05, 04:30 PM | #15 | ||
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uppin to the top!
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