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Old 08-20-05, 06:33 PM   #1
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Old 08-20-05, 07:10 PM   #2
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this beat isn't bad...but u needed way more breath control to ride it betta...cuz ur flow came off jerky...jus a tad


ur lyrics aren't bad


and ur voice comes off well on this track

quality is pretty coo

I like @one point how u attempted up ur delivery by enunciating the words "ing"...etc


and I took ur virginity?

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YEA!!!!!!!!!!


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not a bad drop

creative

only thing taking away from it was ur flow


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Old 08-20-05, 07:14 PM   #3
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Haha I did it all in one take...I'ma make this better, you'll see....
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Old 08-20-05, 07:28 PM   #4
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good beat...........intro is weird lol......yeah ure flow is aiite......quite a funny track...likin this track.....flow fell once or twice....pokemon? lol...good lyrics part from that.....alot bout ure dick......like the deep beat and higher voice...compliments style........lol at the last bit...7/10
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Old 08-21-05, 04:39 AM   #5
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flows not to bad but not good really either lyrics were aiight seems like LE's kinda track lol other than that its decent have really no complaints other than your flow could have been better keep droppin kid =1=....
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Old 08-21-05, 05:19 AM   #6
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flows not to bad but not good really either lyrics were aiight seems like LE's kinda track lol other than that its decent have really no complaints other than your flow could have been better keep droppin kid =1=....


I didn't even try on this track haha...no joke I made it all in like half an hour...but thanks for the feed.

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Old 08-21-05, 05:57 AM   #7
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Wait was this a freestyle? that's how it sounded like, especially with your flow, it was like a slow, lazy kind of flow, i wasn't feelin' it man and who rhymes insane with brain nowadays haha, sorry man don't mean to hate i'm just lookin' out fo ya
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