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Old 08-25-05, 05:46 PM   #1
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"Subtle" a diss to a couple individuals

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Seeing everyone is in the mood to diss Livin' Legendz..... and they dont mention me
here is a diss to three individuals........ careful, their names are mentioned sublte

-=Subtle=-

This so called soldier thinks he's got General status
ya bitch ass still in training camp… cuz u cant pass it
Loosing sleep over the shitty quality of yur verbal flow
do all of us a favor and make us forget about u…..just lay low
To make u feel better, he likes to DR and vote poorly……so
when u see his vote u know its by “enie-menie-minie-moe”

I can see why this other cat has a rating of R for a very good reason
cuz his filthy attitude swings come and go…. Like changing seasons
Cant stomach that newbs are coming up with skill.......he cant fathom
like a newborn........ he throws temper tantrums cuz RV wont vote for him
Ya aint the read deal, just and extra additive…….. like a bouillon cube*
leave u laid up in the hospital, eating and shitting through the same tube

This poor soul hasn’t had a girl since Grizzley Adams shaved his beard
dress up as the boogey man and hide in kids closets…. At least u’ll be feard
Speaking of closet, I cant believe u still in…. everyone knows u ‘heart’ cock**
had to make a getaway to Canada cuz u got bored with the guys on yur block
This aint no “Weird Science”………………........ so that sig will just tease u***
u a champ? That’s funny, u have a better chance raising the dead with voodoo


*buillon cubes are only used for extra flavor, in soups or meals
** heart = an actuall heart symbol (I ‘heart’ Amy, or something like that)
***Weird Science is a TV show that kids design this girl on their computer and she comes to life
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Old 08-30-05, 11:53 AM   #2
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safe drop man.

good representin.

not your besty but the wordplay and shit was there and a few decent punches.

stay up.
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Old 09-19-05, 09:35 PM   #3
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that first verse better not be about me........
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Old 09-22-05, 08:20 PM   #4
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^^^^ whats your real name?
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Old 09-24-05, 02:10 PM   #5
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nice....................
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Old 09-24-05, 03:00 PM   #6
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prettty decent drop man, wouldnt say its ur best...but got tha job done....yo rtf on my nat killa diss...1
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Old 10-09-05, 02:10 PM   #7
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Decent drop here.Disses were ok.Original concept with the sublte diss thingy.Next time..try to word ur punches in a way that you wouldn't have to explain.Cause explaining punches is getting played out on RV.
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Old 10-09-05, 02:25 PM   #8
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overall it was ok, not the best wordplay and shit...
...punches weren't really creative either....5/10

AVERAGE DROP!!!

people dissed...

1st verse = Narc-Uzi (no question about it)

2nd verse = R-Rated (that's who i wud say)

3rd verse = Drakel (cuz of the canadian and grizzly adams shit)
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Old 10-10-05, 09:49 AM   #9
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This was coo...aiight...so~so....The punches where like taps...but Its was st8...
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