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aight, yo

you retarded or sum?, I'll chew you like gum
This guy must be too dumb, notice that dissin you is fun*
there has been many gossip bout you, look: you got fame
if you make a track dropin words for me is jus the same
look when you diss a nigga u supposed to make him feel
next time come harder so you at least had an attempt to kill**
you is known as the clown of the site, cuz ur style is languished
the methodology of my diss, is simple: your drops are rubbish
and that gots me astonished, how can a nigga be so insulted
you must have dissed many cats on a single stunt, man
damn, you did!, now I understand all your hoodoo
poor puppet tryna make it in, like a voodoo***

(hook)
you must have an Elbow Grease, a strong decease
Maddrapper'll die before he sees, retards don't get kissed****
and you think you hot?, nigga please, get on your knees
you must have an Elbow Grease, cuz you are gettin yourself teased

What's an Elbow Grease?, look on a dicitonary you sucka
and when you do look at nice words that won't get yo stucked up
fuck that, I'll get Maddrapper known as the Wack Rapper
I'll make you turn of your light, without makin effort, like a clapper
c'mon You crush the best because you brush with crest?
haha that's the wackest line I've seen from you since "I'm the best"
many cats on here look forward to beef and finish like Bums
Bonecollector chill out, I don't wanna have ta collect yo bones*****

(hook)
you must have an Elbow Grease, a strong decease
Maddrapper'll die before he sees, retards don't get kissed
and you think you hot?, nigga please, get on your knees
you must have an Elbow Grease, cuz you are gettin yourself teased

chea!
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* then why errbody disses you?
**He dissed me but he didn't had a single personal
*** He started gettin dissed cuz he made a track dissin a lot of cats
****He said "Look fool I can kiss a girl and get wet baby cake and lace"
*****Bonecollector is the only friend of Maddrapper haha

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Bizzacckkk

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205135 (Link)

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Bizzacckkk

------------uppin.................

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Bizzacckkk

*sigh*...I see a lot of problems here now.First..the biggest...you didn't rhyme a lot.

"look when you diss a nigga u supposed to make him feel
next time come harder so you at least had an attempt to kill"

"you is known as the clown of the site, cuz ur style is languished
the methodology of my diss, is simple: your drops are rubbish"

"and that gots me astonished, how can a nigga be so insulted
you must have dissed many cats on a single stunt, man"

"What's an Elbow Grease?, look on a dicitonary you sucka
and when you do look at nice words that won't get yo stucked up"

"many cats on here look forward to beef and finish like Bums
Bonecollector chill out, I don't wanna have ta collect yo bones"


^^As you can see..these bars do not rhyme.Even accented...it'd be tough to make it rhyme.I noticed you had no multis..internals that mattered..nothing.Flow was bad.

And as for content.Your style was generic.I wasn't feeling that.And your explamations..I think you needed some links for some.Like that one about him dissing you and not having any personals.Put a link to show it.Same with the one about him makin a diss to everyone.Links.

You need some work.

aight newbie... before you say those lines didn't rhymed.. listen to the audio and shut the fuck up...
put a link??
nigga look at the "Quick Drop To Ax Dogg" right below this topic...
then cum talk to me?

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Bizzacckkk

You not a prince and your slop is dense you mind turn
Whack with in hours never attack with powers you best learn
Just a crab wanting fame why blab out my name I’m concern
Rhymes dry like a drought so what this guy be about
Should just reply to my clout you just fish like fried trout
Write whack art no devastation, black mark on your reputation

y r u now called concern???? i thoughtv u were maddrapper
hmmm..........

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OYD MAFIA

^^^^
hahaha... aight, I'll PM u nigga, u don't understand...

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Bizzacckkk

.........uppin...........

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Bizzacckkk

^^^^^what the fuck?

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Bizzacckkk