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09-07-05, 02:57 AM
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LMFAO Peep this poem my bobble head ass nigga wrote me lmaooooo
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Boobie I fucks witchu, straight up Fa'sho, watch me them other guhs don't call me no mo'. I knowed it was true, the first day I seent'chu. Why you thank I do the thangs I do? Remember how I used da wine and dine you? Steal 211's and Barbaque? I even gave you a bubble bath and fed you grapes. They was on sale that week a dollar ninety eight. Romatic evenins after dark, street light walks around ya block. Like the very first time you came ova my crib and got all scared, cus that roach was on yo Tims. I was right dare with a can of spray, to be your Super-Spic and save the day. I ain`t even pay my light bill, so I can take you to the club..... Don't knock ova does candles and burn up my rug! And that nite we made luv, for a long liddle bit 'uh time. Hope you got yours, cause I damn sho' got mines. I woke up early and made you breakfast in bed. Sep fo I ain`t have no juice, no grits, and no eggs. Didn`t have no cereals and was fresh outta milk, so we had some toast and some potada chips. I use to rub lotion on ya feets, and massage ya back. I found you some glue, when you lost one of your tracks. Now what man you knowed, ever loved you like dis. Gul please just keep my name on that Things To Do list.(E.sOsa)
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09-07-05, 03:04 AM
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lol..thats nice, but he needs a dictionary. lol@ super spic. Damn.
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09-07-05, 03:18 AM
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Whys That?
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I found the last line solid.
"keep me on the list of things do list" Kinda dope. I prop a nigkah for trying some poetry,when he obviously aint a poetry writer. Last edited by Ysdat : 09-07-05 at 03:23 AM. |
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09-07-05, 03:22 AM
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lol, and yea, wtf is a guh? in reference to the first line....yea, so why are you fucking him?lol
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09-07-05, 08:41 AM
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Girl* lol...i found this shit real cute..lmao nigga said he find the glue when i loose my tracks rofl
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09-07-05, 04:55 PM
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wow...
stop messin wit dude untill he get his GED... ^^ werd
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09-07-05, 05:47 PM
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damn that was tight for an illiterate cat.
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09-07-05, 05:49 PM
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Its so hard to read... Could be spaced out...
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09-07-05, 05:58 PM
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Its so gay... It could be erased...
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09-07-05, 06:05 PM
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Never Around
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09-07-05, 06:04 PM
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lol that was cute
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09-07-05, 06:49 PM
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meh i actually kinda think he was trying to be dumb... the way he wrote the poem.. was from an un-intellectual stand point.. which he could have spelled words correctly.. but to me... the way he wrote.. and the subject he was writing on.. got his point acrossed.
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09-07-05, 06:51 PM
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so was he deliberately tryna look like he skipped 90% of his english classes?
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09-07-05, 06:52 PM
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no.. look closely holmes.. he spelled words like massage correctly.. but yet.. spelled the word girl wrong.. he obviously can spell.. like i said.. it was getting the point acrossed..
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09-07-05, 08:54 PM
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lmfao@yall dumb hypocritical illterate fucks trying to clown..
obviously the whole poem is a joke yall act like it was some dead serious poem waiting to be published lmfao.. you people of all people have no right to clown on education..because RV is your education and thats what brings a tear to my eyes.. anywho i posted this up cuz it was funny..who cares about the spelling ..shit was funny.. |
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