What gets really annoying, is when people vote against you in topicals because you don't have enough

emotion
imagery
description
whatever

when you're obviously not basing your verse on it.

Our topic was 'Awakening Creatures', with me and Tweety. I don't really care if I win, but the shit is stupid when I had a piece clearly met to NOT be emotional, and then someone says I don't have enough emotion and gives it to the other person.

My approach --- awakening in the morning, going to work
her's --- possession

I notice the voter didn't say anything about vocabulary, I guess that doesn't matter.

The difference between me and Tweety's verses was she was trying to be deep, which isn't original, and I was trying to make a twist to it, but she still gets a vote because I don't have something because I wasn't trying to do that.

Really, I'm tired of people breaking things into categories when people are obviously shunning some types. Maybe you're supposed to use them all, but I don't see how it makes sense sometimes. Raw emotion mixed with a humor piece? It'd be messed up. Shit's stupid.

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[/whine.]

*Hands Daemon a tissue*

This guy is smart....

No..that wasn't our topic.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207622

It was animated Creatures that what our Topic is...Not awakening.

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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*

- dabs his little beady eyes. - I'm just so sad that no one loves me...

Oh, Animated. Same difference. Awakening, Animated, what does it matter what the topic is? That has nothing to do with it. And Animated Creatures was bound to try and bring something up demonic... o_O Really, ya have to be ORIGINAL. And cool, like Daemon.

Animated happens from Awakening..and stuff. So my piece fits into both categories, yo...

I even based my name on Demons..yet I'm still cool.

i didnt read the whole thing cuz i'm really not into topicals,but tweety's style is very basic,where she just makes the last word in every line rhyme...which is very elementary....typical beginner girly shit....the other dude has a much larger vocab and multies,and just seems more quality

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Yep everyone tells me that I need to change my rhyme scheme..but shit...That's how I write...Oh well...

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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*

anyone who votes on topicals on imajery n emotion are nerds.Just vote on enjoyment n creativity.Fuk all em nerd termz.And "deep"?shit..i seen that topical battle u talkin about.and all i can say is...stop trying to be william shakespeare.That shit is gay.and that is advice to the 2 of you.

Stop trying to be a thug. How the fuck are you going to compare poets to one poet? I'd rather be compared to Poe. And guess what, you know who Shakespheare is, so why wouldn't I want to be like him, a world famous poet known way past his life?

he wuz good before.but now..he is just plain ghey.and i ain't tryna be a thug.It aint' trying.And poetry is whack.Would you go up to ur girlfriend n read Macbeth or Hamlet to her?No.You go up to her n play some gangsta rap or some shit entertaining.And that poetry shit you write...it is immpossible to spit that in audio.Cuz to comprehend one line we have to read it over and over and we have to grab a dictionary.I mean..profound lyrics is good and all.But you guys on this site overdo it.Make ur lyrics audio style.Rappin can get u money and help you support ur life n shit..while being fun and considered a hobby at the same time.Poetry is (somehow) a hobby to some..when it boooorrrrinng.At the time of shakespeare...his shit was like Eminem today.It wuz a complete different era.Too uncomparable.He's know past his life cuz he did revolutize shit..but not people outgrew it and spit on it like we do to hispanics and gays today.

True.............Allen Poe is dope

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mystery Is a Freak!!

ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*

You're wack, face it. I don't need a life of fame or luxury, but I'll get luxury because I'm actually going to work and take no stupid shortcuts to get there, and I'll be with roommates and shit. You're a sad person if you base your life on trying to become world famous and then you'll just get your dreams crushed everytime you try to take a step in the business. Did I ever say I want to put the complex shit into audio? Have I ever said I write for four year olds? I'm thirteen, if you can't understand what I say you need to just fuck off. How many times have you been banned? Get a clue.

I hardly expect a wannabe thug to like you who only cares about shit that concerns him to like poetry. Trust me, I'm not going to go next to my girlfriend and start rapping at her. Not everyone shares your tastes, thank god.

This post...signifies that I won the arguement.WHy?Becuz when someone loses an arguement..then they end up dissing.And you ended up dissing.Haha.And I don't solely use my life to try and make it as a rapper.But you never know.The shit i spit could get me somewhere.While you gonna be a poet.Poets write books..authors don't make SHIT.Ya hear?Authors don't make SHIT.And wtf at you tellin me about dreams being shattered when you a young urban kid with no experience on that subject.And you don't put the complex shit on audio then.OK.SO you write shit speccifically for people on the net?You write a song..and then you read it and say..."yea..now I can impress those guys on the net"?U can't do that.And I'm trying to tell u something that could help u.writing for people here is wasting ur time.Make ur rhymes in a way that u could spit it.And the rhymes u make is simple.Just grab a dictionary.and put fancy words.and disguise the fact u ain't saying a fuckin thing.And I ain't say u gotta to go to ur bitch n start rapping.But wat girl likes to listen to poetry?none.And not everyone on the NET shares my tastes.But in real life..I'm in the majority.All that talk about banning is irreleavnt to the arguement.