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09-17-05, 01:55 AM
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New to RV
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A Muslim, forever more.
IP:
..... Heh. Nevermind.
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09-17-05, 05:50 AM
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Straight From Da Lab!
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IP:
This is a very nice piece...the emotion is very good and from the text I can see how strongly you feel about the muslims. Though I'm sure the US ain't that bad though, lol. But just like you to know I think the muslims are cool.
I think you can work a it on the flow...because some of those lines are stretched. Maybe up your vocab a bit? Overall a solid, strong piece, nice work. Keep this up man.
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