www.soundclick.com/speatsproductions

i made the beat

my voice is fucked up cuz im sick, so if u hear me breathing very loud its because im asmatike

i left feed on both of leady's song

quality is not that great. i didnt really work on that for this song

thanks

Ite first off the beat is really eerie and dope for this track...props there.....quality youre right its not good....but lyrics are eerie sendin a chill down my spine....flow is on point....maybe a lil more emotion...at the begining but after the emotion picks up real good.....hook...is quite eerie too....eminem type ishh...this is a really good track and I know this shit is true cos you told me bout it and I feel where youre comin from..add another verse...or two...up the quality potential song of the month def...keep it up

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up and thanks apreciate it

i was gna peep it but S/C isnt loading!! :S just leavin a black dot so i remember to come check it out! lol

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thanks man lol my sc isnt loading too, i think im gonna sign up to dmusic

lol, yeah i think i'll sign up there as well.

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yeah? wats that like? and its 'miz' lol

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www.dmusic.com
its like a soundclick,but always working

and i know that its miz? lol

lol oh sorry no i get it lol

beat starts weird.....

quality is iffy but adlibs can be more lined up track is emotional...nice story i have to say.

Return love

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...240#post2442240

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u want me to return feed with only one line lol? yeah right

alright listening

flow:you got better a lot better with ya flow 7/10
lyrics:lyrics are cool....you got better here too 8/10
beat:you made it damn its pretty tight...good selection for this typa track 8/10
voice:7/10
quality:just aint workin for me 7/10
overall:7.5/10 this was a cool song

overall this was a tight song work on fading out ya songs tho it sounds hotter...but yea nice track man i'm feeling it hook is pretty catchy it had a nice melody too it...damn man since you been here you gotten hella better man...keep it up

~1

rtf
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beat was ok...but lacked a lil production

flow doesn't seem to have breaks...jus continual


not bad


but work on delivery


lyrics deep


not great...not bad = aiight


stay up

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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

Speats. Better than some of your other tracks

The beat was pretty good. Definitely matched the topic well. Your flow was much better than some on RV. For the most part you stayed on point. I think one thing that stood out were your lyrics. To me they were pretty good. Overall a good track man. A 7.5/10

Please return feed on my track - Be You