Come Ill

Bring hell and smoke but like a telescope my eyepiece try feast
On star constellation a bazaar creation in Heaven my sight increase
This vapor grip like a paper clip attaches flavor that drips, stuff never cease
Hell its strange in America had to change my character like Clark kent
Sparked an event of me flying with cape trying to escape, put a dark tint
On my car glass, like pilots I falter on flight unstable plus alter the height
Of tables during discussions insuring the Russians don’t return to fight
Like a government I damage airs and manage affairs such as social
Security its local purity in the ghetto, take advantage and touch global
Crew populations with new occupations master of disaster like Chernobyl
Involved in a affairs lame but like airplanes accommodate folks
Give flight make them live right, try to educate with quotes
Dedicate my votes to a candidate with plans great for success
The streets make cats crazy can’t be fake and lazy became
Bold and stronger from cold and hunger want food, gravy see fame
Be tamed by thugs, face game by scrubs hustle aimed at clubs
It’s a bazaar pace like Scar Face in mob crime which involve
Time in jail, maddened by life endeavors face strife forever is a job
Cash is exciting but my billfold struck by flash of lightning so
I’m broke spent too much when went to search for bling yo

some of it didnt really make sense to me, or it was too corny lol
like...

"This vapor grip like a paper clip attaches flavor that drips, stuff never cease"

the paper clip part was corny and the rest was random
but overall it was a good peice, could have put a little more
thought into some of it but it didnt 'need' it.. good job

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