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^^Click on "Sippin' Margaritas" Mixing: Q Beat: DJ JB "Sippin Margaritas" Hook: All Q Lyrics: Verses 1 & 2 Q Theme: Reppin' real versus make-believe Holla atcha boy!!!!!!! http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211417 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211488 I'll RTF>..drop links 1 P.S. I used 2 lines from Biggie's flow in "Brooklyn's Finest" Last edited by Tha Q. : 10-15-05 at 09:56 PM. |
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the beat you chose is pretty sick....the lyrics are pretty cool.......damn u gotta flow like common and talbi kwali in this shit....damn this shits hot fire fam......the delivery is hella nice...damn this shits got me bobbin my head llike crazy...mos def. feelin this shit....where u get this beat at???
overall-8.5/10
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^^^preciate the feed...The very first track I ever recorded--back in 2001--was a song called "The Life" with a beat by DJ JB. I hadn't used any of his beats since that time. So, I decided to search S/C for him and this turned up.
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werd, nice track, they sippin margaritas, lol, i like that chorus. *iz jelous of yo quality* werd. i like tha way u record yo shit. n*ggaz round tha way call me Q..q..q bitch, werd, that part sounded kool. at 1st i wuzznt sho if id like it or not cuz i aint really into them kinda beats, but i did like it, shits dope, u know, werd
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IIte listenin, it seems ure talkin and go into rap, which I feel is a real good effect likin the first verse lyrics, feelin the real shit here, flow is good, delivery has been upped very much, beat is ok, likin youre switch from slow to fast and back to slow, likin the hook, lovin these type of lyrics from you, 2nd verse, flow is better, it seems more "warm" likin the lyrics, also feelin ure switch of flows...nice track...one..get at me on msn
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nice track man, im lazy for feed but very nice beat, u showed me this before, nice flow, i think this is your best beat, i like when u change your flow to fast , aint feelin the anoying voice in the chorus man, like second verse, but prefered the frist one, overall nice track man
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sometimes vocals sound a lil bit quiet, they might need to be turned up, cuz sometimes i cant understand them cuz the beat is too loud
hot beat nice flow nice lyrics like i said, vocals just need to be upped a lil bit 8/10
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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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can't front... feeling this joint right here... no matter what kats complain about when it comes to you they can't deny that this joint was pretty damn cool... beat was dope... liked the lyrics... i see you getting at kats (phenom-in-all)... that's OYD fam... but it is what it is... skills spoke for self on this one... liked the change ups... beat was kinda loud... ya adlibs are always "yeah" and Uh-huh and bitch" try to find another way to spice it up.... good shyt... i'm sure the fam will have sum'n to say about this eventually... until then... keep it gully...werdage
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^^^Aiyo...don't take this as a "diss" track...cuz it wasn't...It's above bein just that...As far as my ad libs, do you have any suggestions? I was just thinking that I'd like to broaden my range with them. thanx 1 ![]() |
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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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i'll holla atcha on AIM or yahoo when i get a chance ... shyt was good... but ya adlibs could use a make-over... i'll holla atcha
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I actually took ur advice on it...and did my adlibs/dubs differently on my new track called "A Beautiful Gay" LOL @ my shameless plug! |
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sleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeep
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Seattle Hat Wit A Lean
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word yo
im def liking this beat, i think you fit it real nicely. ya flow is hot real solid, i like the switches towards the end.. lyrics is str8 like usual im loving the hook yo, amazingly catchy ive said it before but ill say it again....you always kill the hooks iif we ever collabed id make sure you did the hook, cause your shits catchy as hell... the delivery is real solid here too, neever any problems with it there really wasnt anything i didnt like in the track, real solid in my book. goood work man
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^^preciate da feed
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