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10-15-05, 10:23 AM
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Intermental - The Message
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check this out, hope you feelin it, its called "The Message", vote hot if ya feelin it..one.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211585 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210857
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10-15-05, 10:28 AM
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dont really know what to say......
not ur best...beat is unique... lyrics could be more simple, but kl sounds like ur angry or summat... but like i said...not ur best
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10-15-05, 10:29 AM
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ayyttt..............
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10-15-05, 10:51 AM
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up.......................
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10-15-05, 10:59 AM
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Not feeling the beat on this one...dunno what exactly that throws me off though...
Good concept you working with here, hook is nice add-on to the song in fact. You managed to keep your flow on point. Your delivery is there, you sound aggressive hehe. Using good internal rhyming which gives your flow sort of natural pace in fact. Got your lyrics down as usual, liking this track. May have added another verse even though your verse was sorta long. Maybe you should've done two and made the first one shorter you know. Just a minor thing though...nothing serious... Keep at it cutie, you know you got more coming...
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10-15-05, 11:06 AM
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o thanks ma for the feed...........
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10-15-05, 11:22 AM
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Hell yeah
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im seriously feelin the beat, sounds a newby beat lol but its dope, aint feelin the chorus,i like this song man, very nice quality, very nice flow, i seriously think this is your best presence man cuz this is really good, just change the chorus and the song is gonna be dope seriously, dopee man keep dropin, and record hockus pockus part 2 fool  lol anyway peace man |
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10-15-05, 11:23 AM
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lollllllllllllllllllllllllll
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10-15-05, 12:53 PM
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uppp.................
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10-15-05, 01:03 PM
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Middle Weight
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its a good song, the parts just dont really fit together
the beat is good, but doesnt really go with the idea of the track u tried to establish a "message" type of song, but u didnt give a message at all. woulda been better if u'd tried to make a point or suttin n stick wit it. n i think a slower beat n flow wudve better suited the song 2, but u came fast on it... u have good delivery n flow, n the lyrics r good, but it just dont work for this song |
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10-15-05, 01:46 PM
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Iite thanks G.......
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