Yup yup, so I entered the RV Idol thing and first task wasn't the easiest one in my opinion. I ain't too big on club tracks usually but I did what I could. I know peeps will be listening and voting because of the competition but I want some detailed feedback from people who are not in the voting council as well.

So check it out:

Work Yo Shit

I'll return the favor if you drop your links. I left feedback to:

The Message by Intermental
50-50 by Speats

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Well I cheked this before...you come in welll....flow is decent....jus work on ure precense and also delivery....it seems like you need to really open ure mouth when ure rappin so they words come out better...but decent shit...

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Thanks for the feed cutie...

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awww the quality is bad lol, nice flow, fell off someplaces, mmm fell off then seriously, mmm dunno what to say cuz seriously the flow is really bad, finish a line at a snare, mmm sorry no hate but aint really feeling this, just work on the flow girl iight

.::.Speats.::.

really like this song, imo its the best of the RV idol songs

hmm flow is good....bit choppy good delivery ya presence was ya best felt like you were reeally psyched up......erm ya done well emotion was nice good track keep up

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OYD MAFIA

flow off in a few spots but much better than ur last track this beat was too fast for you i think but i like this beat
quality not that bad really
not feeling the whole intro shit
emotion wise u seem kinda layed back but not bad
overall pretty good track props ur elevating fast

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Thanks for constructive feed everyone...

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this was an aight track...flow was good at times and then bad at other times...mic presence is pretty good...delivery needs a lil work...lyrics were aight...good beat choice...i'd say work on ya flow and delivery and u would prob show a good amount of improvement...overall this was a pretty decent track...rtf on "So Long"

listenin too it now...your flow is decent....doesn't really fit well with the beat just work on flowing with the beat your quality is bad..so upp on that and your emotions are alright.....your presense is kinda there not really your flow just needs too be uppped for the beat.......you sound like you just recorded and didn't even know the beat was playin work on that...overall 5/10

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aww drama gettin ruff! haha..coo shit tho...you got the potential mos def..But..i think u just gotta get into the mood a lil more..stand up and take the mic and act like you on stage lol...cute drop tho better than alot of white girls i know lol