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10-18-05, 12:28 AM
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Guilty Of Chryme
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Free Agent..
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Figure I'm too new here to be wanted.
But nevertheless here are 2 verses I've dropped recently, Vs. Drop Dead.. This kids weak with hands, He needs to get his best enhanced.. ..& you wouldn't see a double d if it wasn't for breast implants Lyrics are criminal, rip threw ya mind n leave ya subliminal tense.. So much that, .......I'll make this mothafucka' drop dead... in a more literal sense So fly I'll grow wings, n straight ride thru ya written, I'm a falcon g & its true "drops from above".. when I threw him off the balcony Claims he spits the realness, But I'll disagree & allow this session Yet he's new....... ....& all of R.V. knows he's got front lines, Like the battle section This kids a gimmick, he don't know war.. I'll make his head pop Don't think I'm readin ya name backwards... ...............When I say that your battle verses are all dead drops .................................................. .................................................. .... -Vs. Black Arts kid's all fiction.. like movies, Watch 'em get bitched wit facts & It's safe to say you're gay..everyone's seen Men In Black! This kid's fillin up w/ my punches, You know he ain't feedin And Illist popt art so much.......you'd know he got eaten I'm blowin the sparks, This fags still single.. needs man aide A showing of art?.. Might have to cancel.... The way I just "rained on your parade" This kids a fraud, loosin' privileges.. While I floss precision.. Makin' noise in raps? Only time you ever had allowed drop.. You lost permission! You could vote on 'em if you have time also..  |
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10-18-05, 12:34 AM
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the real man of steel
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IP:
Not bad......drop a try-out in e-style forum........
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10-18-05, 12:52 AM
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The Rise
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yea not bad at all...possibly the legacy
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10-18-05, 09:15 AM
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This is my first post!
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IP:
You Can come With TTI
Check Us Out mayne................
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10-18-05, 12:26 PM
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...::Nu-MoNeY::...
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IP:
Join Tha Testament Dawg!!!
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-The Triggers Like Cryptonite, I Got Gunz n I'm Grippin Em Tight...Equiped Witta Pipe...Got A Infra-Red & A Infa-Blue...When I Mix Dis Light It Look Like A Tree Wit Bright Christmas Lights, Look Like The Bloods 'n Crips In A Fight...It'll Snipe Ya Light Bulb n Dim Yo' Life-
^^U Lil MotherFuckaz Aint Spittin Like Dis^^  |
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10-18-05, 12:35 PM
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Guilty Of Chryme
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IP:
Today's verse...
-Vs. Lextownkillas Yo.. Don't respect clowns, this cats the next down.. & I'm outta this world... ....................While this kids stuck in "Lex Town" This kid aint shit, in this match he's comin short... & you're outta my league?.... .............Mothafucka I'm in a whole different sport Kid's fruity, Ya whole style? I'll fucken shoot it... can't claim you invincible... ...................everyone knows killa's get executed noone knows this lame, son your lackin the fame.. & I'll kill a lex town.. guess i really buried ya name send ya to hell like the devil..kid'll get smacked back & its true noones on ya level... ...............its actually pretty hard to get that wack* My straps kill, you in the passed while i'm passed ill.. kids got so many short shots... ............You'd think his fucking lines were half filled! This kids full of fillers, I'm more criminal than killas You are who you battle?.. ...We all know that's a lie, you'll never be the illist This battle'll be the end of ya faith.... & you want sixteen lines son?.... .........Stick to bars, so its a fact you'll get ATE * - http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=211953 |
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10-19-05, 12:47 AM
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You Love My Style.
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IP:
Umm..........Complexity is missing and your wordplay can be improved.
and you use simple rhyme pattern like Fame/name/ etc... Keep droppin u aint ready for A.I Yet
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10-19-05, 01:02 AM
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Guilty Of Chryme
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IP:
ehhh.. that verse was a quickie.
but thanks for your opinion. |
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10-19-05, 09:33 AM
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...::Nu-MoNeY::...
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IP:
U Still Got A Spot In Da Testament, Hit Me Bacc Hommie
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-The Triggers Like Cryptonite, I Got Gunz n I'm Grippin Em Tight...Equiped Witta Pipe...Got A Infra-Red & A Infa-Blue...When I Mix Dis Light It Look Like A Tree Wit Bright Christmas Lights, Look Like The Bloods 'n Crips In A Fight...It'll Snipe Ya Light Bulb n Dim Yo' Life-
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10-19-05, 09:34 AM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP:
hes already been signed
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10-19-05, 09:41 AM
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...::Nu-MoNeY::...
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IP:
2 Who??????????????
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-The Triggers Like Cryptonite, I Got Gunz n I'm Grippin Em Tight...Equiped Witta Pipe...Got A Infra-Red & A Infa-Blue...When I Mix Dis Light It Look Like A Tree Wit Bright Christmas Lights, Look Like The Bloods 'n Crips In A Fight...It'll Snipe Ya Light Bulb n Dim Yo' Life-
^^U Lil MotherFuckaz Aint Spittin Like Dis^^ |
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10-19-05, 11:50 PM
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Guilty Of Chryme
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Chryme Syndicate....
muahaaaahhaaahaaa Lmao. |
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10-23-05, 09:45 AM
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NO SURRENDER
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IP:
Seen you on b-boys...
shoulda come to LL.
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10-27-05, 09:14 AM
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IP:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212336 haahahah he sucks
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