For dinner had beef because candy’s bad for teeth
Shook and hidden over books I’ve written as chief
Of rhyme have to face a thief sometime and that’s bazaar
Catch hell from critics and they’re parasitic belong in jars
With lid tight this kid write ill stuff, drink beer foam in bars
Try to have a plan great like a landscape so talk to an architect
On how to march correct and identify script keep your heart in check
Bring the butter this is lyrical toast and spiritual toast for breakfast

Spit piles of vapor that ends up on files of paper attractive
Nouns ill like active compounds a real chemical laxative
Girl in a skirt with ass is an inert mass of sex content
Play complex rent for one night if it s done right like flint
Sheets spark a deep part of passion, fashioned in quilts
Coo-chee juice flows like a sluggish stream bedpost tilt
Form love wish and cream cock deep with hot heat built
To hang when soft

Task is done after I blast guns on the streets with a sista
Speak in a whisper like them dang yang yang twins kiss her
She knows spoken French I’m stroking a wrench on my car
Changing spark plugs dangling on smart dubs doing good so far
She’s in for a long speech, take her home and reach a sexual
Conclusion in which panties are torn and thrown this so textual
Girl my room dense and perfumed with incense so lets kiss
Along with a wet reminisce let me tongue you so brisk Miss

my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2501079)

my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2503697)

wasn't no where near impressed especially for somebody to come in everyone else's thread like your a vet............on an alias..............but its plan to see your garbage........sorry this was thrash

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Mr. Multie if you didn't have such a big ego you could eat rappers alive with your multi's you have no humor and your multi's are not comparable to every day speech if you can change that don't know rather i would be able to compete with you for example you look stupid calling this garbage

Spit piles of vapor that ends up on files of paper attractive
Nouns ill like active compounds a real chemical laxative
Girl in a skirt with ass is an inert mass of sex content
Pay complex rent for one night if it s done right like flint
Sheets spark a deep part of passion, fashioned in quilts
Coo-chee juice flows like a sluggish stream bedpost tilt
Form love wish and cream cock deep with hot heat built
To hang when soft

i kinda liked that verse actually, that you wrote there^^^ lool

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This would sound good with audio...but on text...it's kinda messed.

Natural killa thanks for the props for real homey

i was almost touched............*sniffle* *sniffle*
and homie i don't have a big ego.............on the net an ego is pointless
but you on some other shit post'n everywhere fo reasons unknown........
and its disrespectful to do the shit you do but like i said this is the net
so have a nice day......don't worry i won't respond to any other pointless post
by you

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...wait...for one...I don't think what you say is comparable in every day speech...I don't see people going

'Hello'
'Coo-chee juice flows like a sluggish stream bedpost tilt
Form love wish and cream cock deep with hot heat built'
'...Good day to you too.'

So no, no one really rhymes in real life...

Maybe you'd be a good...

no...

maybe you'd stop being so annoying if you didn't have an ego

By the way...


...Yes. About everyone calls this garbage, and those who don't say 'it's mediocre' and you go 'thanks for the props'. When someone gives you real feedback that doesn't say you're the greatest, you explode and you're the one who looks stupid as fuck.

Go easy on him for he not knows what he's done

oh and did you leave feedback on my OM Blood on the carpet and in the close yet?

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can i borrow fluffy?

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Depends. Did I?

HA! HA! Mr. Multie tried to score and got laughed at bu thades you picked the part where i'm thinking to myself and my subconscious mind think that way