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10-24-05, 03:31 PM
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Paranoid - "Natural Killas Execution"
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www.soundclick.com/Paranoid05
leave links too. yup y'all know the goof Natural Killa, he needs to get on his knee's and say I'm sorry to all of rv, he needs to make a thread apologizing hahahah. links: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2506534 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2506526
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10-24-05, 03:42 PM
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Middle Weight
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vocal levels too muffled
ur too loud on the mic lyrics were coo delivery was bland because it sounded as if u were talking voice is good on track wud love to hear it with better mixing/eqing/dubbing 6/10 track RTF Please http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211585
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10-24-05, 05:28 PM
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Ike
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ok listening....
flows getting better...you still gotta work on it.....but its gettin there....gotta work on touching it up...where its not so choppy... quality...ehh..work on mixing man... your voice is good...you just gotta learn to deliver it better...and youll be nice... once you elevate...youll be good man...trust me....
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10-24-05, 05:37 PM
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Flyweight
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IP:
WTF is this??
a diss to me? LOL... well..first off..your quality wuz bad..a lot of shit wuz inaudiable to me... And for fucks sakes..you and Limited edition need to realize.. It's not Tree-Knee.. It's TRIN-E... |
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10-24-05, 06:01 PM
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IP:
^wow your pathetic, die.
I dont care how you say it your still a fag.
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10-24-05, 06:05 PM
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Flyweight
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IP:
WOw..I'm pathetic?
U go making an audio diss to me off of some "beef" that we have....and I didn't even know it.. Damn...I've gotten to the point where I've got beef with people and i don't even know it -_- |
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10-25-05, 12:57 AM
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IP:
Listening...
Flow was better, but word you still need some work on it...vocals were loud...really loud...you need to mix better, lyrics were coo...delivery and emotion could also use some work. But overall, it was decent. Word. Keep it up. |
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10-27-05, 09:58 AM
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IP:
thank y'all for the feed
uppin.
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10-30-05, 12:40 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP:
vocals a little to loud but nto by much really production nto great but not horrible
flow has improved props on that emotion could be better work on it props
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