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View Poll Results: waht needs improvement?
Production 1 100.00%
1st verse 0 0%
2nd verse 0 0%
Chorus 0 0%
Nothing..this shit slaps! 0 0%
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Old 10-27-05, 11:59 AM   #1
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Run wit tha Real - Rich D, L-mo, Status ( super slapper!!!!)

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212729

INTRO- STATUS

1st verse : Rich D
Chorus: Rich D
2nd verse: L-mo

3rd: status when he hurry up and get here and record it.....lol

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=274121

this song iz dummy slappin!
Ya boy Rich D made tha beat.....Slappin wit that unique LBE style.

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Old 10-27-05, 12:03 PM   #2
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Drop your song's link...
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Old 10-27-05, 12:04 PM   #3
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my bad bout that.....got stupid 4 a minute...lol
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Old 10-27-05, 12:10 PM   #4
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Your adlibs a lil' loud... no real loud... I love this beat OOOO!!!!!!!!!!! Ya flow is aight, your presence pretty straight, delivery is good.. Chorus is deso (decent).

L-Mo: Flow is straight here... I thought that he was gonna be a lil' more hype tho.

What beat is this? I swear this beat got me hype... *wants it, like now!* lol haha

But overall- the production levels, were a lil' woo... but uhm, other than that it wasn't too bad..
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Old 10-27-05, 12:13 PM   #5
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haha, thanx......i aint great at production but hey...., and i made the beat......i got a billion. maybe we could do a tracc..? i got a few other beats u prolly like if u liked that one
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Old 10-27-05, 12:16 PM   #6
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WHAT?! you made that beat? Gimme...

Hit me up on AIM = angelbkaheavenly..
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Old 10-27-05, 12:25 PM   #7
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i dont got aim, i got msn, and yahoo.
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Old 10-27-05, 12:29 PM   #8
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.........................aight yahoo = divine86angel
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Old 10-27-05, 08:32 PM   #9
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yo you faggot i thought you wouldnt nkow how to use this site, LOL i see you liek the feedback


and lady WTF you aint tryna leave feed on my intro


upping this gangsta shit
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Old 10-28-05, 02:56 PM   #10
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quality seems crisp


beat is decent

hook is weird with the delivery...and the lyrics seem annoying


verses...flows are good


but some lines forced in the 1st verse

and the start and stopping in a couple spots seemed sloppy

not bad...just needs polish


2nd...decent



6/10

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Old 10-28-05, 06:34 PM   #11
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C'mon everybody, hit me wit some kind of feedbacc......
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Old 10-29-05, 05:39 AM   #12
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Loving the beat...

First dude: aight, good shit, flow is pretty good, fell off here and there cause you wanted to get too many words out there you know. Delivery might be upped a little, more fire in em you know. Lyrics are on point

Hook: good add-on but it needed this special touch to it, more hyped up vibe you know

Second dude: grimey voice, lyrics are good, flow is definitely on point but delivery gets bit monotone here and there. Started off pretty good but I wanted the verses to fit with the beat as in getting people hyped up ya know...

But overall solid shit y'all...hit me up bout that collab (aim, msn or yahoo.)
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Old 10-29-05, 08:11 PM   #13
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yo why aint no body given me feedbacl on my intro........fuck

and upping for some feed on my intro
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Old 10-31-05, 02:49 AM   #14
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Uppin this for some feed, and lemme kno what yall think of Status intro.....
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