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11-09-05, 11:34 PM
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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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Real Music ... I.G.
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http://community.rapverse.com/showp...98&postcount=12 decree featuring Marvin Gaye http://community.rapverse.com/showp...025&postcount=3 hemisphere and purleedef
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 CLICK DA SIGGY  "real recognize real but still others remain jaded believing bullshit accounts of how "so-and-so" made it there's a formula for gimmick emcees that are over-rated: wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it" Last edited by <)-(> : 11-09-05 at 11:37 PM. |
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11-10-05, 03:11 AM
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IP:
beat - Perseverance is always tight with beats. i jus hate his little whisper thing he does
concept -this is a good idea. i like the way you approached it hook - simple but good. you get the point across. lyrics - lyrics weren't bad at all. this was actually pretty good. flow was good. some multies i heard that made it flow a lot more smooth. mic prescence was good. emotion definitely fit the track well. the only thing i can kinda complain about is the fact that the vocals were a little too high. could barely hear the beat. good track man. we gotta get one going |
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11-10-05, 03:27 AM
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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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IP:
thanks man.... preciate da feed... just tryna do my own thang and bring a lil variety to RV... leave links and i'll RTF
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CLICK DA SIGGY "real recognize real but still others remain jaded believing bullshit accounts of how "so-and-so" made it there's a formula for gimmick emcees that are over-rated: wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it" |
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11-10-05, 08:20 AM
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IP:
your improving wit your quality n shit man, I like the way the hook sounds...the beat coulda been turned up a bit though, hard to hear cuz your verse vocals were louder by lot then the beat. your hook vocals were good I like the momo sound you gave it though, turn it up a bit to fit wit the verse vocals. you dont have to but w/e anyway I thought you had a good flow and quality is comin along. your emotion isn't bad lyrics were fa sho killa. and word I cant wait to collab wit you
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11-10-05, 02:14 PM
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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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IP:
yeah man.... i'm trying new techniques with every drop... and i'm still using the same shitty mic from when i started... once u get my condenser and learn a few more tech's with da mixing it's over.... leave links to ya joints... open for collabo's just hit me with beats and topics... werdage
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CLICK DA SIGGY "real recognize real but still others remain jaded believing bullshit accounts of how "so-and-so" made it there's a formula for gimmick emcees that are over-rated: wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it" |
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11-10-05, 09:56 PM
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IP:
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why...so u can rush a mothafucka pssf |
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11-10-05, 10:42 PM
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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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IP:
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^^^ shyt's unnecessary... we spoke about this shyt already... i'm letting it go
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CLICK DA SIGGY "real recognize real but still others remain jaded believing bullshit accounts of how "so-and-so" made it there's a formula for gimmick emcees that are over-rated: wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it" |
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11-10-05, 04:57 PM
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Nt Your Average
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IP:
dope beat....
Intro:Lovin The Whispers Lol Dope Ya Flow is DOPE Lol Delivery is nice like this Presence-You Got This,Tight presence feelin ya confidence,ya mics dope as well -_- Lyrics-Yeah,I Feel em,Really Good Hook-Werd At This,Simple Good Not Overdone Overall-Well This Is The Best Track I Herd From You On The Real I Love The TOpic As Well Good Shit Keep Up 8.5/10
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11-10-05, 08:23 PM
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IP:
i was gonna drop a track to this beat lol...........
like what you did wit this........ the hook is dope...... hip hop... state of the game is weak..... glad you made a track to address it... feelin this UH OH....... was that a Marvin Gay sample??? that was hot keep dropin that fire mayne
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11-10-05, 10:45 PM
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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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IP:
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CLICK DA SIGGY "real recognize real but still others remain jaded believing bullshit accounts of how "so-and-so" made it there's a formula for gimmick emcees that are over-rated: wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it" |
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11-11-05, 08:52 PM
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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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IP:
uppin this for da sleepers.... just lemme know if my quality is getting better... damn.... i'll return the favor if that's what y'all worried about
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CLICK DA SIGGY "real recognize real but still others remain jaded believing bullshit accounts of how "so-and-so" made it there's a formula for gimmick emcees that are over-rated: wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it" |
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11-11-05, 09:55 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP:
*listening*
I ilke how you came in.....shit's pretty tight. You flow pretty well. You probably got one of the best flows on this site.....honestly. I don't know why you're getting slept on. Your chorus needs work. The concept is good and so are the lyrics, but the actual quality of the chorus is ass. The volume needs to be raised on your chorus's vocals as well. This is a good song though, I'm feeling it. We need to get together on a track for real  ™
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11-12-05, 01:34 AM
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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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IP:
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no doubt and thanks for da feed... lol@ oyd by ya name and AI in ya sig...you rolling with both?....by the way... wus da new OYD p-werd since no one bothered to get at me about it....lol...and definitely holla about a collabo
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CLICK DA SIGGY "real recognize real but still others remain jaded believing bullshit accounts of how "so-and-so" made it there's a formula for gimmick emcees that are over-rated: wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it" |
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11-13-05, 11:55 PM
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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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IP:
upppppppppppppppppppppp
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CLICK DA SIGGY "real recognize real but still others remain jaded believing bullshit accounts of how "so-and-so" made it there's a formula for gimmick emcees that are over-rated: wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it" |
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11-16-05, 08:55 PM
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Flyweight
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IP:
IG your production skill is up and coming which is cool but your flow and concepts are dope! Much respect! Check my jump off kid!
One Barz
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