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11-11-05, 04:54 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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Peep Game On This Track
IP:
yeah u leave feed i'mma get u back just leave a link
check it out www.soundclick.com/holyhustlasrecords peep "Who" yeah i'll edit with links ------------------------------ Links ---- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214070 ---- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213730 Last edited by C Walk : 11-11-05 at 05:03 PM. |
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11-11-05, 05:01 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP:
okay using the devise beat...old devise at that.....man quality is terrible...alot of pops an the sound is muffled......ok flow isn't to good....your hitting the snares but your completely off rhythm...ya flow is very rigid....smoothe it out by fully pronouncing words an using better transition words....delivery wasn't really full of emotion it sounds like u was jus raising ya tone...u dun wanna sustain the same tone u want ya tone to change up every line.....hook was decent...overall u really need better mixing bad...however you have def improved greatly...stay up......1
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11-11-05, 06:13 PM
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Ike
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IP:
ok hope im listening to the right one....its the one u were waiting for implicit to get on lol...
qualitys aright...i thought it was gonna be like absolutely horrid the way trip was talking lol....but yea...a few mixing tricks and youd be straight... flow is ok...but u still gotta work on it...like trip said...your not completely on rythmn...youll get better with that in time.... delivery was aright...you could switch up your tone every now n then though...u used the same delivery throughout the whole song...switch it up a lil bit with diff things your saying... overall you got mad potential man..pretty good voice....just a few things u need to work on and youll def. be straight...keep up the work..and keep dropping
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11-14-05, 06:13 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP:
uppin i got two of the best on rv too feed on my tracks..lets get more
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