yo this a thang indeph did a while back but it was on my puter and it was just what u heard and the beat and i always wanted ta collab wit indeph but he couldnt cuz his old mic is broke and he aint goin to the studio anytime soon so this kinda worked out perfect..yo finnally got ta spit wit my dawg..yo leave feed and i'd appreciate it..u cant tell me i aint elevated niether

here's the link: http://www.soundclick.com/straightaim

here's my 2 feeds:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215291
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215709

Indeph please get a new mic foo!.....seriously...your dope.....but your computer mic quality is holding you back........just get a new fucking mic before i turn you into a walrus

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lol he has ta now...that mic he used broke like i said

yo indeph thats dope as fuck, yeah lets go decree? lol anyway, really good flow man, nice lyrics, get a better mic, alpha assassin eeuuuhhh i dunno man, flow still sucks , but its better, you voice is to pitch up for this track, lyrics are cool thaugh, just work on the flow, quality is just dope, overall cool track

RTF ON ITS BEEN A LONG TIME COMING

shit i hate my own shit..i know i coulda done better but i redid it cuz i thought i had too much emotion but mainly cuz i fucked up on prouncicating some of my shit so it wasnt clear...but i shoulda done this a lil more diff..shit...i might still redo it..or i'll just drop a new song

okay cool, now return the favor or i can get tis thread closed

ur flow and lyrics are better than your production...when u bring that up to snuff, you'll have a winning combination

2nd cat is talkin and off beat, IMO


beat is good


track has flaws, including muddled mic quality and one emcee who was off beat


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He is the 2nd guy you bundle of joy. And he's definetly improved if you seen his past shit.

Decree? I thought his name was Alpha Assassin. LoL. Yeah Deph I told you before that you were straight except for your mic. But for real you'll do good man. GOod flow. Feelin the lyrics.

Alpha - You have gotten MUCH better than before. You're not quite there but it is better. We need to feel more emotion. I'm not believing what you're saying.

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rofl A cred raps.

Indeph's shit is on point.........but damn juss gotta get a betta mic.....flow delivery all that is strate.....

Alpha yea man u have elevated but u still gotta work on delivery and ya flow.....juss work on ur structure and you'll be strate wit da flow....

pz

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First guy.. I'm guessing is indeph.. Was pretty good man.. Work on deepening your voice a little and your raps will be gold bro.. Shit, I'd collab with ya if you get a better mic...

Other guy..
Uhh no.. I'm guessing you just started rapping... Try and make your voice sound less whiney and gay.

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shut the fuck up bitch..NAS groupie dickriding piece of shit...go fuck ur austrillian friends who think they can rap...it straight up disrespectin Nas wit some wack ass bitch stealin his name...

not ta forget that u named ur ass after nas's wackest album so u must have no respect for urself..not like u should