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Tie-D has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-05 11:29 AM.

GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-05 12:05 PM.

Ima Tie-D up wit my lines he needs to Tie-D up his rhymes
On RV kid your raps just get thrown around like wind chimes
You wont win this time like a broke dealer Tie is dopeless
Tie-D your record will stay winless your raps are hopeless
When RV reads your raps its funny your a laugh and a half
But I'll send you into the "new year" - "0-6" on my behalf
Un-like a camera you dont get the picture ya just a quick flash
No one will ever bob there head to ya rap like ya gave us whip lash
Only fame your name will obtain is on the wall of shame
Tie-D says 'L'augh 'A't 'M'e 'E'veryday, becuz he's so lame

*Weak Yes, Beat Him?.. uh Yes*

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G, u’l never get on stage cos the lights will blind you…
tho I no you love the screams wen “hes behind you”…
this is only wen you performing wiv X-spitty or LE…
cos you love being “jammed” between if u got petroleum “jelly”…
If you thinking you a angel courier cos u posted quick…
Ur more like farmer giles……… only delivering shit…
Reading ya verses I wonder if you baked or wasted…
Cos the cakes never got a name, how can we taste it?..*
You follow the herbs in legacy like a little girl and they leon…
But props cos ur the best thing outta Canada since celine dione…
That’s a pretty big achievement, might call it titanic...
Your lyrics have sunk now G, your beyond a mechanic...

*never uses many personals, all pre-written punches

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Voted For: GKillaz05

tie-d's flow was wack and a lil rough gkillaz betta all the way...sorry tie-d no hate...vote goes to GK

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Voted For: Tie-D

G
Ima Tie-D up wit my lines he needs to Tie-D up his rhymes
On RV kid your raps just get thrown around like wind chimes
.....weak.....
You wont win this time like a broke dealer Tie is dopeless
Tie-D your record will stay winless your raps are hopeless
..........Better yet still a lil weak.....
When RV reads your raps its funny your a laugh and a half
But I'll send you into the "new year" - "0-6" on my behalf
... lol ......damn.................
Un-like a camera you dont get the picture ya just a quick flash
No one will ever bob there head to ya rap like ya gave us whip lash
............Good.....
Only fame your name will obtain is on the wall of shame
Tie-D says 'L'augh 'A't 'M'e 'E'veryday, becuz he's so lame
.........weak and forced....

Overall You had a good verse a little weaker comin from You i expeted more .............But anyway You get what im sayin you just dont ease up on peeps jus bcuz of a rec.

Tie-d
G, u’l never get on stage cos the lights will blind you…
tho I no you love the screams wen “hes behind you”…
./.....weak..../
this is only wen you performing wiv X-spitty or LE…
cos you love being “jammed” between if u got petroleum “jelly”…
.....LOL I Like that ....
If you thinking you a angel courier cos u posted quick…
Ur more like farmer giles……… only delivering shit…
.........Good./..
Reading ya verses I wonder if you baked or wasted…
Cos the cakes never got a name, how can we taste it?..*
.......weka.......
You follow the herbs in legacy like a little girl and they leon…
But props cos ur the best thing outta Canada since celine dione…
..............weak.............
That’s a pretty big achievement, might call it titanic...
Your lyrics have sunk now G, your beyond a mechanic...
....better...

This is a very good verse comin from you but compared to your opponenet i couldnt belaev I liked your verse more but you came with more and better punchez so I beleave that you take this battle

Nice Man .................

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Voted For: GKillaz05

Reading ya verses I wonder if you baked or wasted…
Cos the cakes never got a name, how can we taste it?..*

^ lol, aiight metaphor.. the rest of the verse didn't hit hard at all though

When RV reads your raps its funny your a laugh and a half
But I'll send you into the "new year" - "0-6" on my behalf

^ pretty cool line

both had 2 good lines a piece.. but gkillaz attempted more wit with the last line and throughout the verse.. tie-d had lamer punches =/

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i bet you thought it would be a bit more one-sided than this..?

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I bet your right, lol.. I guess I should of tried a lil harder, still goin' to win.

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Voted For: GKillaz05

Ok

Tied-D

G, u’l never get on stage cos the lights will blind you…
tho I no you love the screams wen “hes behind you”…
- Ehhhh...no
this is only wen you performing wiv X-spitty or LE…
cos you love being “jammed” between if u got petroleum “jelly”…
- Not workin
If you thinking you a angel courier cos u posted quick…
Ur more like farmer giles……… only delivering shit…
- Weak
Reading ya verses I wonder if you baked or wasted…
Cos the cakes never got a name, how can we taste it?..*
- By lickin it?
You follow the herbs in legacy like a little girl and they leon…
But props cos ur the best thing outta Canada since celine dione…
- Good try but...no
That’s a pretty big achievement, might call it titanic...
Your lyrics have sunk now G, your beyond a mechanic...
- Not workin man....

You need to up your game somewhat man - try attacking the opponent by thinking of witty lines that are original....you need to improve a lot in your dissing aspect - I could see what you were trying to do with some lines but nothing was workin or connecting...flow was ok though, and try to be more personal as well...


GKillaz05


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Ima Tie-D up wit my lines he needs to Tie-D up his rhymes
On RV kid your raps just get thrown around like wind chimes
- Decent opener
You wont win this time like a broke dealer Tie is dopeless
Tie-D your record will stay winless your raps are hopeless
- Weak but personal
When RV reads your raps its funny your a laugh and a half
But I'll send you into the "new year" - "0-6" on my behalf
- Funny personal
Un-like a camera you dont get the picture ya just a quick flash
No one will ever bob there head to ya rap like ya gave us whip lash
- Not workin but ok
Only fame your name will obtain is on the wall of shame
Tie-D says 'L'augh 'A't 'M'e 'E'veryday, becuz he's so lame
- Ok

Clearly you didn't put much effort into this, but overall the verse was not that good, just about ok tho....flow was fine, rhyming as well and some lines were pretty decent and good use of personals....

GKillaz won this no doubt, clearly, stay up both tho...

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thx for honest votes, keep them comin' 3-1, UPPIN...

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