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Old 12-14-05, 12:24 PM   #1
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I Walk With Two Clips That Spew Hits
Plant Two Tips Werever You And Your Crew Sit
I'm Sit Back And Spit Raps That Split Backs
I Drop More Golden Flows Than Urinary Tracks
The Effect Of My Rhymes Bring Brain Infections
With Enough Skill To Fill Talent Show Conventions
A Criminal With Lyrical But Soon Physical Hits
With More Puncline Spreads Than Miracle Whips
I'm Literally Fit To Get A Newbie To Rip
I'm Fully Equipped To Spit Fluent In Scripts
With C.S. I'll Be Blessed To Flee Wreck
But Infect Those To Try To Deflect My Spree Techs
I Once Knew I Had Skill To Swallow The Last Pills
And Get Fucked Worse Than Vanilla Ice' Last Deal
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Old 12-14-05, 04:08 PM   #2
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It's ok. Some Barz seemed to forced to keep your multi rhyme-pattern going and flowing right.

But overall it's not that bad, Most of the lines i've heard/seen before though.
Keep it up ...
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