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Old 12-15-05, 01:18 AM   #1
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Old 12-15-05, 02:10 AM   #2
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beat is dope as fuck

i like the hook... nice flow on Q's verse
Past Tense... damn, u always got such good expression on the mic, nice flow and nice lyrics and verses overall both of u

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Old 12-15-05, 05:48 AM   #3
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listenin...beat is dope...i heard this the other day i think...q comes in, i like the hook...maybe cud add a few effects but its nice..quality is fine now...lyrics are dope...flow is crazy..i love the fast flow from you....multis of the chain...im def feelin this verse...u bringin sum nice hooks lately catchy, J Roy, damn I love ure voice, quality is dope, lyrics are kl..pretty good...i like the over emphasis on the words..flow is gd...this was a good track...pz
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Old 12-15-05, 08:40 AM   #4
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Old 12-15-05, 08:54 AM   #5
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shit..

beats dope

Aight q hook is nice

verse

flows dope
deliverys koo
emotions koo
lyrics are dope

what caligular mean?
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aight

hook again

dope hook

past

deliverys dope
emotions dope
lyrics are koo
presence is dope

hook again

good track

overall 9/10
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Old 12-15-05, 10:07 AM   #6
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thanks for that feed peeps just drop links too whatever....

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Old 12-15-05, 10:33 AM   #7
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wow @ the beat.....

1st dude..nice flow...lyrics is hot..emotion is their..oh this is a chorus..lol...ok verse..flow is killin it !!...nice fast shit...damn..nice shit man or real...lyrics is nice as shit.....2nd dude..nice voice..flow is on nice...feelin the lyrics...emotion is good...presentation is nice too...nice shit man...

good track guys !!!
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Old 12-15-05, 10:37 AM   #8
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Old 12-15-05, 01:16 PM   #9
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beat is fucking sick, flow ight not my type shit tho but its stright for the most. up ya lyrical skills a lil tho
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Old 12-15-05, 02:16 PM   #10
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Oh shit, damn the beat is raw as shit......

Q wit the chorus, tight message..

ight Q, wit the verse. Good mix between a quicker, more percise flow. Tight verse man, your message had noddin my head. There was only part I was concerned with, the "Still," the pause to me was too long, and threw the feeling of your verse off a little bit. But the shit was tight.

ight past tense comes in. Another good message, your flow was a little shakey at the beginning, but it seemed you got more confortable as it went on. Your style was a little simple, try to make it more complex by uppin your rhyme scheme. Overall good drop man.

This was a def download, good shit peeps. PSA fuckas....
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Old 12-15-05, 03:18 PM   #11
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Beats top

Q is fuckin ill. Flow pressence lyrics & everything is ill. Im feelin this hook too, decent, past tense coming in...decent effects on vocals, good flow clear as fuck this track, heavy shit.

Im feelin it a lot, stay up...

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Old 12-15-05, 03:23 PM   #12
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Q nice flow and delivery...lyrics were nice...the hook is coo it fit the beat well...past flow was coo delivery was coo...the lyrics was good...quality was decent...over-all nice track keep it up.
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Old 12-15-05, 08:07 PM   #13
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alright good shit can we get some more feed
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Old 12-16-05, 04:13 PM   #14
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Old 12-17-05, 01:49 AM   #15
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shyt, nice dope, likin tha beat, feelin tha chorus alot, speakin of, Q makes some dope ass hooks, so good idea on havin him on here, anyway your verse is staight suprised me, but yea overall i give this 8/10

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