Verse 1
See Medicine Just Won't Relieve This Cruel Feeling
I Knew Being, What I Am Now, Would Fuel Beatings
From Situations, Grab A Needle, My Wounds Healing
A True Being, A Legend That Once Blew Ceelings
Also Ripped And Shred Rooftops Off The Hinges
Knock The Screws Off That Blew Off All The Fences
And Spread My Limit, Converged It To The Vast Fields
I Grasp Deals, But These Issues Would Blast Meals
Off My The Table And Make Me Unable To Rise
Focus And Be Noticed So I'm Placed In God's Eyes
Cause My Shits Better Than Yours, I Got Heavier Swords
Ready For War, Sever A Reverend Who Rending The Lord
From An Abyss And Out Of The Mist With Clenched Fist
And Venture To Find A Tombstone To Rest With
I Blessed With A Flexed Twist In Sinical Rythm
But A World Isn't Ready To See This Lyrcal Wisdom

Hook x2
Still Tryin To Rise
I Can Make It To The Top
Still Tryin To Rise
With A Skill That Can't Stop
Still, Ill, And Skilled
With A Mic To Show It
Time To Dribble
No Balls? I've Got Time To Grown 'Em

Verse 2
Make My Spine Disconnect, Walk With A Twisted Neck
'Til I Get Respect, Still Infect And Brutally Disrespect
If you Hit The Set, Cause I'm Reachin For First Aid
Since My Birthday, I Roam In A Permanent Earth Grave
Is It Worth Rage? Splurt Names And Make Shirts Blaze
With Tips To Rock Beat's Harder Than Lifeline's In Earthquakes
Since I'm Takin Medication To Ease The Pain Of Life
Walk Through Rain At Night Hopin To Open A New Range To Sight
Cause My Diameter Would Breach And Teach An Amatuer
Not With Calibers But Lessons Like I'm A Company Manager
Understand A Bottle Of Motrin Won't Hold In A Boasting
Of Hosting Growing Within My Mind With Oceans'
Of Empty Thoughts, I'll Space Out Like Universal Tech
Huge Adversal Wreck With New Set Of Verbs To Set
On The Paper, Sharper Than Razors, A Lyrical Major
Get Rid Of your Lead......Like It's Meant For Erasers


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Thanks For The Feed Rey.................................Uppin

It was cool. I Like your style, it had multi's in it from my opinion. I'm liking your wordplays during the second verse, nicly done. This'll be better on audio. Nothing much I can say here, it was all good. Keep writing.

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