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Old 12-21-05, 10:44 AM   #1
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''The Realest''

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First audio track, just decieded to record it and post it up on here,
Want some cristism to elevate.

Song is called ''The Realest''
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Old 12-21-05, 11:27 AM   #2
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beat is ok...vocals r to low...voice is ok...flow is on..u dont seem to comfortable on the mic...lyrics seem ok but..im not straining to catch em all....
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Old 12-21-05, 11:47 AM   #3
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aight

beats koo

delivery needs upping

emotions low

i can hardly hear you..

levels are fucked

flow seems on point

not bad for 1st audio

keep up an elevate
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Old 12-22-05, 03:55 AM   #4
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Ite, thanks for feed y'all.

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Old 12-22-05, 08:53 AM   #5
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RTF please
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mic presence is non existent...u sound soooo far away from the mic


flow isn't off beat, but it's more talking than flowing


this is lackluster

work on every aspect of your rapping, from mixing quality to lyrics

keep droppin though


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