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Old 12-30-05, 01:08 PM   #1
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Old 12-30-05, 04:14 PM   #2
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str8 up, amp the beat some to match ur vocals...maybe 1-2 decibels


ur lyrics are def. ur strong point...if u develop a real distinct flow to go with it, u'd be killer...at best, ur flow is decent to good...there's room for improvement there


overall, not bad homie


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Old 01-01-06, 08:56 PM   #3
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werd....uppin.............
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Old 01-01-06, 10:36 PM   #4
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u flow like taiyomou denku this shits nice i love the beat lol n the lyricz is nice ...ya flow is koo....*clapz*
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Old 01-03-06, 08:42 AM   #5
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thx bro...uppp'n
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Old 01-04-06, 07:28 AM   #6
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Beats nice. Intro is dope. WOAH. Effects again Damn. You got nice lyrics and a nice flow. Butturn down the effects, its overpowering. Your lyrics are dope aswell, so's the flow.
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Old 01-04-06, 09:57 PM   #7
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no FX...i jus don't have the dubs 100% on..
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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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Old 01-04-06, 10:02 PM   #8
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werd nice ish tight vocals flow and deliverey beats nice and wroked well with flow on this one good drop man propz
rtf on my clap bakk remix
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Old 01-05-06, 12:29 PM   #9
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thx bro................
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