I'm sick with the mind It's expanding by the day
If It gets any more pressure it's gonna burst like an earth quake
All my stress is building up you can see it in my vains
I'm about to kill thats all im thinking of in my brain
Thinking about blood stains Thats all i ever see
I just try plan ahead so I can live clerverly
my styles over the top cuz I got a adhd
shit I got loads of problems and there over ruleing lately
I was crazy since a baby ive got some mental issues
Ive had enough of this life and i just run out of tissues
im sick of my abuse cuz thats all i feel like i get
as soon as i were born I was an open target for neglect
while my mother so pregant she must lit a cigret
thats why i got a brain thats feels like it's dead
All i here is irritating sounds coming from downstairs
cuz I can't get away from my step dad who stares
And I hate his guts so bad because he's a desease
I'm just waiting for the day that i'll be able 2 leave
Cuz I can't take it when this bitch breaves
I wanna kick him down make him bleed wid my knees

sounds like you need anger managment...good read...
i like the mutis. the flow was aight...good style on this one.
maybe a hook and a second verse...this shit has the pontential
to be fire. i like the concept, good topic. i wanna see more.

thanks dawg.............................................. ....