Ready For War Pt. 1

wake up from nightmares seein empty plates and cups
sittin to the side confused feelin like my fates eruptin
my skin is breakin on my knuckles then i put on my buckle
i hit the wall once more and im hearin some struggle
i peek out the door now theres a muzzle to my head
im puzzled but then i see a pool of red with two dead
then he said somethin i couldnt understand well
he pushes me down and i bled now hes demandin hell
comandin and tellin with the gun so i stumble back
he lowers the gun but fumbles that then runs back
out the room now im definitely confused with bruises
so i cruise out the room slowly and see the two again
i knew these men they were my brothers and good friends
im feelin like im in the hood again creepin down hall
without any peeps at all i get to a corner and hear a call
i fear and stall hearin the footsteps comin closer to me
this is a foe to be i take out my knife he dont kno me
im low on the floor as he comes around the corner
cut the achilles heel like Kill Bill i down the foreigner
there will be no mourners i say to him as i slit his throat
i take off his clothes and try to fit his coat the shit is broke
took a hit and toke from the cig in his lifeless mouth
now started book down and look around i went south
towards the armory to arm me with the weapons of armies
im checkin the alarms while runnin the hall with harmony
never trippin up i arrive while sayin lemme borrow a few of these
gettin the ammo now the lights flickerin like horror movies
too much sorrow and pain aint no one gonna move me
i see three figures at the end of the hall they say "its sam yo"
i cock the gun and they start to run and i yell "im ready like rambo"

Idk how many pieces ima do but im thinkin 3. So tell me how ya'll like it.

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This was a pretty good om i was really feeling it the concept is alttile played could have been alittle better..your structure was good you had nice imagery and emotions going into this drop ...overall keep it up

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thanks for the feed uppin

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