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Old 01-06-06, 12:15 AM   #1
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Hook[x2]
Don’t look down, keep ya head up
Even when you fed up...
So don’t give in, don’t give up

And im ashamed, I turned my back on the problems I faced
Couldn’t accept the mere fact that everything changed
And its weird it appears that in just a short day
More back had been stabbed than Shakespearean plays
I couldn’t believe it so I took a pause in my life
Finally realizing myself the flaws of the dice
Letting my cold heart thaw, turning my back on the strife
But its alright, I mean I don’t lose any sleep at night
I’m just explaining my life trying to make everything right
Nowadays the strive for perfection is relentless, but;
A flaw is just another reason for people to accept us
Embrace us and stop being racist
I mean every day it gets harder to find someone to trust
But you must, find that person that can always adjust
To the hard times, when you feel like your life is stuck

Hook [x2]
Don’t look down, keep ya head up
Even when you fed up...
Don’t give in, don’t give up


Because quite frankly, lately, everyone I know n trust is shady
How can everyone go from loving to straight up hating me?
Its crazy, how I can just show up and blow up right on the scene
But I know the routine, it’s the fact that people love to hate
That’s why this shit doesn’t bother me, cause emceing’s my fate
Gave me a chance, Drakle and Kirk trained me right, OG’s for life
We spit fire, so fuck melting it, We’ll dissinagrate the fucking mic
Found a family on this site, leaders of RV, our bond is airtight
We sparked a foundation, and let that motherfucker ignite

Hook [x2]
Don’t look down, keep ya head up
Even when you fed up...
So don’t give in, don’t give up
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Old 01-06-06, 12:23 AM   #2
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lmlo @ drakel and kirk....good shit though man, nice message, rhyme scheme was a little hard to ajust to, but it was good, nice emotion 'n all that shit eh, keep writing, and all that shit
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Old 01-06-06, 12:28 AM   #3
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lol you like that shit =) yeahh uppinnnnnnnn
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Old 01-06-06, 03:55 PM   #4
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Bumpppppppppppppppppp
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Old 01-06-06, 04:11 PM   #5
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lol u still doin text homie???????
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Old 01-06-06, 04:29 PM   #6
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yea. ill start audio shit too tho.. but yea.. wut uthink of it lol
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Old 01-06-06, 06:03 PM   #7
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yea aight aight, lil hard with the rhyme shit though might wanna check that, other then that pretty nice flow. keep it flowin, hey drop some lines on some of my freestyles... latest was blow u away.keep ridin kidd.

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Old 01-07-06, 03:28 PM   #8
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thanks man .. moree feedback
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