RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Fresh From The Lab > New Release Songs
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 01-06-06, 04:11 AM   #1
Excetera
[].[]_.[]_
 
Posts: 209
From: Hellz Depthz B.C.
..::Wait a Minute [ft] Tha-Q::..

IP:


Last edited by Excetera : 01-06-06 at 04:14 AM.
Send a message via MSN to Excetera Send a message via Yahoo to Excetera   Reply With Quote
Old 01-06-06, 02:40 PM   #2
Excetera
[].[]_.[]_
 
Posts: 209
From: Hellz Depthz B.C.
IP:

Uppin 4 some feed.
Send a message via MSN to Excetera Send a message via Yahoo to Excetera   Reply With Quote
Old 01-06-06, 04:38 PM   #3
Shawn Phillips
pSa - We Ridin Harder Then Blondes
 
Shawn Phillips's Avatar
 
Posts: 105
From: North Siyyde
IP:

ok..other then E's quality this trackl was DOPE.

both flows one, both nice emotion, both nice deliv, hook was pretty hot..

overall this track was dope..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218984
hollaback!^

ThaQ get at me for collab
__________________
SHAWN PHILLIPS
aka M.E.C.C.A
My Enemies Can Come Again

!
My Soundclick
My Myspace

PSA Lets Ride!
  Reply With Quote
Old 01-07-06, 06:31 PM   #4
Excetera
[].[]_.[]_
 
Posts: 209
From: Hellz Depthz B.C.
IP:

30 veiws and only one reply?
Send a message via MSN to Excetera Send a message via Yahoo to Excetera   Reply With Quote
Old 01-07-06, 11:42 PM   #5
Acuity
Rastafari Walk Tall
 
Acuity's Avatar
 
Posts: 4,527
From: East London, (Hackney)
IP:

Hook is kinda crap

Q, the first half of ur verse has some absolutely canibus toppin vocab and metaphors...some ill ass multi's. ur flow slows up n down and ur rhymeschme switches up constantly which keeps interest..i think ur verse is solid bordering coo, but fix that hook man, not sure how its jus meh to me...also i think ur mixed down a lil loud

Excetera, ur quality is looking poor next to this, it sounds like its got dat phone filter on it..lyrics r coo, ur flow is too slow at points, and its like ur missin an extra word from ya lines cos u finish before the snare den try hop onto a snare hitting flo...delivery is aight, id say work on ya flow n buy a new mic...

what beat is this?id love to kick a sixteen on this, get @ me plz

safe

RTF Excetera.1
__________________

"His Imperial Majesty Haile Selassie I, Conquering Lion of the Tribe of Judah, King of Kings of Ethiopia and Elect of God"

Blog

Graphic Designer, Illustrator, Web Designer

  Reply With Quote
Old 01-08-06, 06:40 AM   #6
Key...
You Love My Style.
 
Key...'s Avatar
 
Posts: 4,598
IP:

Quality differences but nice concept...

Q comes with his ussually delivery like Acuity said u got that meta and multi's that kinda got me shooked...

Ex yo flow is like dirty souf its on the slow paste...i dont know if its my headphones but some lines i could hear it clear....quality wise try to do something about it cuz its hard to listen to sometimes b
__________________


Quote:
Originally Posted by Mother Theresa
"Hi Key, You The Only Guy Who Took My Virginity."


Authentik Intelligence
O. Y. D.




  Reply With Quote
Old 01-08-06, 05:12 PM   #7
Excetera
[].[]_.[]_
 
Posts: 209
From: Hellz Depthz B.C.
IP:

Aight good looks man.
Send a message via MSN to Excetera Send a message via Yahoo to Excetera   Reply With Quote
Old 01-16-06, 02:16 AM   #8
Excetera
[].[]_.[]_
 
Posts: 209
From: Hellz Depthz B.C.
IP:

Ups...............
Send a message via MSN to Excetera Send a message via Yahoo to Excetera   Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 01:41 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.