aight well i havnt recorded anything in a while so umm i made 2 tracks tha other night...so u can give feed on either song....and if ur generous enuff to do both feeds for both trax it would be appreciated

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beat is lovely...can I have it please?


I like the grittiness in ur voice here...If you can keep that but make your voice more musical, you'll have a winning combination.



flow is good

I still feel you need to elevate your rhyming to take your flow to the next level


not bad dawg...not at all

just polish up that rhyming


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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

arabian- cool intro...beat is starting cool....yeah that beat is smooth...hook is cool...yeah i agree with^^^ ur not wack u just need to step up a bit and u will be much iller...u did a good job
peep me:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220467

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yeah i liked this beat it flowed nicly..........................

voice is good................................

flow is ight.......................

delievery pretty good fallz off once or twice..................

qualityz pretty good......................................

lyrics were funny and illy at tha same time......................

hook was kinda blah but fit tha track exept yer voice went higher during it but nice drop

8/10 first ive heard from you good ish

Feed used 1/26/06 "i dont need"

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