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View Poll Results: Critic Vs Storm Text Battle
Storm 0 0%
Critic 5 100.00%
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Old 02-03-06, 03:32 AM   #1
Critic
Black Poet
 
Posts: 1,474
From: London
Storm vs Critic

IP:

Battle Rules:

6 Lines Max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



Minimum posts to vote: 250

Check in by: 02-03-06 at 11:52 AM

Must drop verse in 1000 minutes after check in.


DQ'ed.. went over 6 line limit
 
Old 02-03-06, 03:33 AM   #2
System
Guest
 
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IP:

Critic has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-06 03:33 AM.
 
Old 02-03-06, 07:36 AM   #3
Critic
Black Poet
 
Posts: 1,474
From: London
IP:

This kid's life is a storm, it never rains, he’s pour
Wouldn’t be dope with foreheads like Rushmore
Sure just like most of E-Style he’s a bore ya dig ?
The only thing that’s got any bottle is Geda’s sig
It’s a Dazasta your back polluting our screens
U see Daz Y your unpopular like the hip hop scene
 
Old 02-03-06, 08:00 AM   #4
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Storm has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-06 08:00 AM.
 
Old 02-03-06, 07:14 PM   #5
Storm
New to RV
 
Posts: 33
IP:

the name make you tough? only laughter homie, not dread
of course you got a bolder look. ill bring the chisel to ya rock head
I pop lead, you fucking mutt, you wouldnt be lasting outdoors
i dont need verse lineage. NIGGA im asking for yours.
your moms the nastiest whore, she's accustomed to trains dukes..
So if america is the cultural mixing pot
..How many men made you?
Im great to, so get sad, anger mixing with hate
not meaning to dissapoint
.. but diss a point is meant for ya face
this is a rape, too bad you thought you'd get some respect
but you'll fall short. sorta like ya fucking chin to ya neck
my style, BYE BYE NOW, and this all coming after the rape
make an impact here.. then make impact up his face.

Chea.
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Original RB Head
A real AI member

E-Style
it's Easy fucking ya niggaz up. Ya dig?
 
Old 02-03-06, 07:21 PM   #6
Ryan Hughes
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From: Jerzy
This was feedback posted for Storm

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Ummmm......soul clapped............................
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Old 02-04-06, 04:54 PM   #7
Daubs
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From: Salford
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Voted For: Critic

For not goin over the line limit =/ .
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Old 02-04-06, 10:19 PM   #8
Storm
New to RV
 
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what get the fuck out of here. i thught he meant 12 lines, 6 bars.

suck my dick.
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E-Style
it's Easy fucking ya niggaz up. Ya dig?
 
Old 02-05-06, 05:07 AM   #9
Daubs
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Critic
Battle Rules:

6 Lines Max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



Either way it dont mean shit to me...DQ my vote if you wish.
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Old 02-05-06, 12:42 PM   #10
Magic5
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Posts: 3,918
From: Denver, CO
This was feedback posted for Storm

IP:

Storm merked this dude's face..
 
Old 02-06-06, 03:35 AM   #11
Critic
Black Poet
 
Posts: 1,474
From: London
IP:

I win what part of 6 Lines Max don't u understand ?

It was meant to be a quick battle and you take an extra day what the fuck ?

Ain't got no personal and Mim's telling me I got merked !!

Every line is a personal in my verse STFU !!
 
Old 02-06-06, 02:18 PM   #12
Magic5
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From: Denver, CO
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Critic
Ain't got no personal and Mim's telling me I got merked !!

Every line is a personal in my verse STFU !!


Personals don't matter if they're worded to crap and if the concept wasn't god to start with. You lost this battle.
 
Old 02-06-06, 07:53 AM   #13
Storm
New to RV
 
Posts: 33
IP:

lmfao.

Son. suck my dick
U lost. I won.
Im an AUDIO HEAD.
also an RB head. on RB we dont allow 6 line battles.
In audio, i thought u were takling about 12.
If i knew u were saying 6, i would've been said hell no.
I didnt take an extra day. i posted in the allotted time.
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E-Style
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Old 02-06-06, 08:08 AM   #14
Critic
Black Poet
 
Posts: 1,474
From: London
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Alright Storm it clearly states 6 lines,. anyway I stated it on the pm
I sent u and the post in the e-gay style A.I thread.

And I don't do text full stop so I ain't bothered, I'm a topical head
standard.
 
Old 02-12-06, 06:45 PM   #15
Sik Wit It
 
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From: Florida
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Voted For: Critic

v/ Critic



Why? Cus.. he didn't go over the line limit.
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