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02-17-06, 10:30 PM | #1 | ||
Artist, that simple
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*The Artist* ft. Jay Z - *The Artist Mixtape Edition*
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The Artist - Featuring Jay Z
Intro - Jay Z Verse 1 and 2 - G Deuce Chorus - G Deuce Mixing - G Deuce and Vocal - Eyez Productions http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222533 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=221608&page=2 Drop feed and i will return the favor. checked
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02-17-06, 10:41 PM | #2 | ||
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wow....
deff upped your quality and Elevated your delivery and all that!!!!! this is dope kid! yo......... GET ON THE OYD ROSTER!!!!!!!!!!! holla at me!!
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02-17-06, 10:43 PM | #3 | ||
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hahaha, fa sho.
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02-17-06, 11:21 PM | #4 | ||
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first thing I noticed was that your quality sounds a little to fake. way different then your other shit man. your delivery could also use work on this track, needs more energy man. your flow was pretty fluid though, kept me motivated to keep listening. not a great song though man. just not feelin this one. the beat is gay and shit to lol. keep goin hard though.
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02-18-06, 12:02 PM | #5 | ||
Artist, that simple
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uppin............
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02-18-06, 12:11 PM | #6 | |
OYD
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G Deuce ROCKS
but...Imma hit this up a bit lata! Last edited by Tha Q. : 02-18-06 at 12:27 PM. |
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02-18-06, 12:31 PM | #7 | |
OYD
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aiight
nice beat i like the jay sample ur flow is hot voice reminds me of Tupac I'm feelin |
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02-18-06, 04:57 PM | #8 | ||
You Love My Style.
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duece been awhile i listened to ya shit, intro jay got it locked as ussual...
yo quality was little different since its studio vs pc or somehting else..but yo delivery was nice...emotions was little lackin but the rest was butter famz
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02-18-06, 06:54 PM | #9 | ||
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oh yeah.. dat shit at da beginin is tight and i like how that beat comes in ... aight aight good build up just waiten to here the drop.. oh ok.. i thought it was gonna come alot more raw than that but its nice and smoothe dope shit kid..i cant really understand any of the lyrics it sounds good but its not clear enough for me to catch what you sayin.. i like that one sylable rhyme scheme there for a grip.... yeah that shit ill a-r-t-i-s-t
yeah short lil drop no hoook or nothin really just some deep emotional shit.. if i was on that kinda shit it woulda been off da chain..but still solid shit son 8/10
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02-18-06, 06:55 PM | #10 | ||
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yo plus get at me with a collab somtime cuz...........
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02-18-06, 07:36 PM | #11 | ||
I can rap and stuff.
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I don't know why i'm leaving feedback, prolly cuz I was curious to see whether or not you used a beat I used...........which you did. I dunno what's off about your flow but it seems very off. I don't really like your voice, it sounds like Doomsday with a stuffy voice or something. However your lyrics are fresh and stuff. The chorus kinda comes outta nowhere, but hey, not much you can do now. It was iight, nothing that really caught my attention, but keep droppin.
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02-18-06, 07:43 PM | #12 | ||
Artist, that simple
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Lol at sayin my flow was off. Anwayz, Ummm....uppin....
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02-24-06, 01:54 AM | #13 | |||
I can rap and stuff.
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STFU, it was to me. Christ, nobody can take a fucking critque nowadays.
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02-18-06, 08:03 PM | #14 | ||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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aight i'm peepin now,the beat is pretty hot so far......your flow is real nice on this and and your pressense and delivery are cool...jay-z talked for too long in my opinion...but mehh its cool......this is a pretty good song i'd def. bump fam....you gotta real deep voice for how small you look....but its all good..... hmmm i'm likin this man....your flow is realy nice keep this coming 9.5/10
can you rtf on this:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222351 feed used 2/20 "HOP ON In" Last edited by will appear : 02-21-06 at 02:15 PM. |
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02-18-06, 08:09 PM | #15 | ||
Artist, that simple
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yea, fasho i got you on the return.
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