Key Rogue if you think this is bull shit then you can close it, but yo check it. I'm thinking I'm losing my writing Mojo, Yeah you remember me back in the day when I use to drop OM's Like fucking constantly, yeah I need to get back into that, write rhymes and having people like "Damn this was inspirational!". So I need some writing excercise, Like daily, you know?

ideas?

I got one from a friend.

"Lola, You write every-fucking day, Homeworks, or taking notes and shit, but hey anyway's since you want to write good and all, you gots to pratice, I've seen you in poetry classes, sitting there all dumb and shit, don't know what to write, shit is fucking rideclous. When you speak your poem infront of the class, it's horrible!!!!!, I'm sorry Lola, I know your my friend and all, but the truth will set you free, and it did for me , every day, Mrs. Steege have news papers in the morning, what you need to do is go in her class and ask her for a news paper and found yourself a article that you feel interesting in, and write a story about it, and it has to be done on that day. Don't worry about grammar problems, just keep writing, then next thing you know, Boom writer blocks are gone, you got a fresh brain and your writing mojo is running smooth. Most of all, Revise, reivise...Let me say that again, R-e-v-i-s-e, when your done with your story. Thats it for now so,toodles see you on Tuesday ."

Yeah through a email, blah, so yeah any ideas, or this will cool for a start off?

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mystery Is a Freak!!

ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*

Bleh

I just stop writing for a while then

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we all have writters block but lola u used to drop atleast 3 open mics a day....

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I got well bad block too ! I think I'm gonna try this too.

The problem with me is that I try too hard to think in detail,
and people moan and say I force my rhyming when I don't
it's how I write.

But Lola I know what u mean everything you write is like yeah
thats good ! but your use to yeah thats dope...

Block is rubbish !!

But how do you force your rhyme when you do text? explain that to me please on audio is little different you hear the person

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I know thats what I thought,... a few people liked this verse but a few
said that I forced the rhyming ????

Governed by law corruptions hard core
Civilisation’s soar AID’s left heart tore
The river of death’s shore left lock jaw
Don’t have malaria cure was deaths saw

Beyond the shack I dwell is a living hell
I express my dismay but ended up in cell
Don’t have jail the rebel forces would tell
Beyond the cobble paving dead flesh smell
No enriched soil all pure water went boil
World gave Aid to feed but need was toil

I dream of tranquilly to save my mentality
But in reality I can see no form of solidarity


1~

Seriously to me its ok just audio wise is little different like i mentioned if they mean force rhymin with your rhymin pattern...for example hell,tell,smell,cell...etc its basic

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im not losing my writing mojo

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew

link me to yo new shit..wild

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223367

spoke word poem called "My Nigga" ^^^^^^



http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223910


topical called "I am God" ^^^^^


bon apetit

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew

U in STFU? as well..

i read "my nigga" its pretty deep and its like u wrote it with a beat playing

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yeah..stfu is cause i like the idea of telling people to stfu..my loyalty is here though..don't worry about that...you should check out "I am God" Too

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew

o, wow! this chick is here as well as RB. i guess she had to come here after everyone there like.. disliked her and stuff!

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Hmmmmmmm I don't remember anyone who disliked me, I rarely chat to anyone on there. All I do is...Post my Topical Writtens in TNL crew lounge.

:-/

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mystery Is a Freak!!

ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*

hmm.. i was like, joking and stuff.

=/

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