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View Poll Results: Broadway vs. Jay 286
Jay 286 5 83.33%
Broadway 1 16.67%
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Old 02-28-06, 06:31 PM   #1
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Jay 286 vs Broadway

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1-2min not includin intro and outro
any beat
due by fri anytime
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Old 02-28-06, 06:32 PM   #2
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Broadway has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-06 06:32 PM.
 
Old 02-28-06, 07:21 PM   #3
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Jay 286 has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-06 07:21 PM.
 
Old 03-02-06, 04:21 AM   #4
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ummmmm yep... here's me posting my battle a day early....again.....i dont play around ....
track is called "carry the cross"
i spit 2 min of dissis the rest was just production shit, intro, outro chorus...cuz the chorus was general, it wasnt particularly for hit....ha fuck it whatever...peep the track, and put a vote down next to my name....

CARRY THE CROSS - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3577086
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Old 03-02-06, 10:35 PM   #5
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Old 03-02-06, 10:37 PM   #6
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Old 03-02-06, 10:58 PM   #7
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Voted For: Jay 286

ok ok ok...

broadway.. shit at the beginin was pretty unnecessary ok ok...nice beat i like weezy so shits tight but damn wheres ya emotion your vocals are mad high cuz you aint bien loud on da mic at all... your delivery needs help too but ya lyrics is aight you had that the punches was good, personals were above average

aight...
whoa whoa there aint no reason to d/r cats in a battle

aight damn like that flow ... this is how people supposed to rap on the beat.. yeah lyrics is nice emotion needs work but ya delivery aight... production bonus and sound quality you took this one pretty easily
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Old 03-02-06, 11:06 PM   #8
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shit that aint dickridin....i aint even talk to any of those people....im just stating my opinion....its how i feel...just tryin to get other people to step it up....
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


 
Old 03-03-06, 05:53 PM   #9
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Voted For: Broadway

For The Self Of Internet Rappin? i know broadway dropped harder punches.....jay, you got the rapper voice down, but a hook on a net diss? lol............broadway, your voice was a bit shitty on quality but you still had better punches
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Old 03-03-06, 07:18 PM   #10
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ahhh. i dont care who you vote for cuz i know i killed him in ever aspect and you might just be holding a grudge cuz i decided that production was important, but damn man....can a man get a lil feedback...not one word explinations?

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Voted For: Jay 286

Summer...

flowin koo.. on the beat.. simple n strait forward...
ideas are decent nothing special..
delivery is pretty koo..best part of your verse to me..
punches rolled off decent..
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286...

flowin on the beat koo.. gettin up n down into it koo..slipped on some parts...
ideas are koo.. good appraoch with some but ended wrong =/..
delivery...not for me but koo..helped ur punches
Punches.. came off koo cause of the way u shott'em off..
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ideas..tie
delivery..tie
punches..286

overall.. Jay 286.. dude's verse just added up t more in he end.. had a better punch set up which was more effective here which was really the difference..pZ!



i mean that is feedback...so i can understand why you voted....not just cuz "oh yea for the sake of battling" so feedback please
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


 
Old 03-04-06, 07:26 AM   #11
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Old 03-04-06, 03:01 PM   #12
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


 
Old 03-04-06, 05:02 PM   #13
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Ok....this was funny cus broadway's intro kinda hurt himself cus jay's clip in there(the one he was rippin on)destroyed his own whole verse.

Flo,delivery......punches....everything goes to jay. not close.
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Old 03-08-06, 12:29 PM   #14
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keep on voting people.....please.....i mean comon just vote you know you wunna
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


 
Old 03-12-06, 12:05 PM   #15
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uppin for votes
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