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03-11-06, 09:25 AM
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Don't Say My Name
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my computer crashed and i lost a lot of my raps....so this track basically came from scratch but whatcha gonna do....gettin back to work on my mixtape and i think this song has potential to be on it....just lookin for some GOOD feed....if i need to re record it just let me know or if i need to change anything with it just let me know...thanks in advance....
www.soundclick.com/eastsyde holla if you wanna collab links: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2684615 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2684621 |
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03-11-06, 07:00 PM
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IP:
uppin this shit
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03-12-06, 11:14 AM
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IP:
still uppin....
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03-14-06, 11:22 AM
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IP:
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wake up and leave me some feed....please |
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03-17-06, 08:02 PM
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IP:
still no feed....damn shame
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03-17-06, 08:46 PM
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IP:
Beat is sick as hell, send it to me.
Flow is rushed in a few spots, emotion is bad, lyrics are decent, it has potential, but you need to fix up ya flow. Did you make the hook?
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03-18-06, 03:32 PM
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IP:
what's wrong with the flow....i get a lot of "hate" on the flow and i don't know why...and no i stole the beat and the hook was on it...thanks for the feed
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03-19-06, 12:05 AM
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IP:
still be uppin....
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03-19-06, 02:43 PM
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IP:
can't really do too much about my voice....lol....it's all good though thanks for the feed
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03-19-06, 05:28 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP:
alright like rev. said beat is sick its a em beat...your lyrics are cool.....your flow is decent...you sound like u been rappin maybe 2 months right? this dont too bad for just starting keep goin
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03-19-06, 05:31 PM
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IP:
lol naw actually i've been rappin for like 3 years technically but i've been grindin for about a year now....i'm gettin the hang of it....rappin aint easy...thanks for the feed uppin
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03-20-06, 02:14 PM
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IP:
bumpin this shit
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03-20-06, 03:01 PM
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IP:
Listenin, this that eminem beat with nate dogg right? i duno i think so...flow is str8 fam..quality is a let down cant knock u on it...delivery is pretty nice, lyrics are kool=, nice presence..u need to dynamic process this..wait this another nate dogg song hook mixed is nice...pretty str8 joint famlay
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224779 can u rtf
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03-20-06, 09:16 PM
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IP:
I don't like beats like this. They make my flow choppy. But, you handled it. not bad there
Ilike there delivery of the hook Flow could be a tad smoother, but it fits the beat not a bad track 1 |
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